巧克力— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I love it make me feel relaxed and happy”应为“I love it because it makes me feel relaxed and happy”。建议注意句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用连词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I love eating chocolate because it makes me feel relaxed and happy. Since I have a very intense job, chocolate helps me relieve stress.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“No, I ate a little piece of chocolate almost everyday”应为“Yes, I eat a little piece of chocolate almost every day”。建议注意时态和否定词的正确使用，并避免语法错误。

範例: Yes, I eat a small piece of chocolate almost every day, which is why I have gained 4 pounds this month.

建議: 回答不连贯且含糊，存在语法和表达错误。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并提供具体细节。

範例: When I was a kid, I didn't eat much chocolate because I grew up in a small town in China where chocolates were not easily available.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议使用连贯的句子，避免断句，并提供更具体的理由。

範例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and makes people happy. Additionally, some people believe that dark chocolate has health benefits.

建議: 回答表达不够流畅，句子断裂。建议使用完整句子，清晰描述喜好，并避免语法错误。

範例: I prefer dark chocolate because it is not very sweet. I especially like Nissin wine chocolate, which has a subtle taste of wine.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“it's really depending”应为“it really depends”。建议注意语法准确性，并用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I think chocolate is often associated with love and affection, so whether it is a good gift depends on who you want to give it to. You wouldn't want to send the wrong message.

× I love it make me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ I love it making me feel relaxed and happy.

这里动词短语需要使用动名词形式，表示“使我感到放松和快乐”的动作。

× I have a really intense work so I'd like chocolate help me relax.

✓ I have really intense work so I'd like chocolate to help me relax.

动词like后面接动词不定式to help，表示“我想要巧克力帮助我放松”。

× No, I ate a little piece of chocolate almost everyday.

✓ No, I eat a little piece of chocolate almost every day.

这里时态应为一般现在时，且everyday应分开为every day，表示“几乎每天”。

× This why I'm gaining 4 lbs this month.

✓ That's why I've gained 4 lbs this month.

表示过去到现在的变化，使用现在完成时更合适，且句首应为That's why。

× Now I'm free now to I grew up in a small town in China.

✓ I grew up in a small town in China.

句子结构混乱，去掉多余部分，表达清晰。

× While I was a Kate.

✓ While I was a kid.

单词错误，Kate应为kid，表示“当我还是个孩子的时候”。

× So I think chocolate is popular around the words, for one thing, is very tasty and delicious.

✓ So I think chocolate is popular around the world; for one thing, it is very tasty and delicious.

words应为world，且句子缺少主语it。

× And it make people happy.

✓ And it makes people happy.

主语it为第三人称单数，谓语动词make应加-s。

× Another thing is I think there are some people believe chocolate is.

✓ Another thing is I think some people believe chocolate is good for one's health.

句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× Good for one's health, especially dark chocolate, which comes.

✓ Good for one's health, especially dark chocolate.

句子不完整，去掉多余部分。

× I also have this. Special like Nissin wine chocolate, A chocolate has a little bit taste the wine.

✓ I also especially like Nissin wine chocolate, which has a little bit of wine taste.

句子结构混乱，调整为正确表达。

× I think chocolate has always been associated with love affections, so it's really depending who you want give the gift.

✓ I think chocolate has always been associated with love and affection, so it really depends on who you want to give the gift to.

短语搭配错误，depend后应接on，give后应加to。

× so it's really depending who you want give the gift.

✓ so it really depends on who you want to give the gift to.

动词形式错误，should use depends；并且句子缺少介词on和to。