记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce grammar errors and redundancy; make a clear topic sentence then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct verb forms, articles, and collocations (e.g. “set reminders”, “at the right time”). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I’m fairly good at remembering things because I organise my tasks and keep a simple system. For example, I use a digital calendar and set reminders for important dates, and I also write short notes in a notebook. These methods help me recall things at the right time.

建議: Make the answer clearer and more concise: start with a direct topic sentence, then briefly describe the incident with correct tense and vocabulary. Avoid awkward phrases like “red letter day” (means a good day) and incorrect structures. Use linking words such as “for example” or “one time”.

範例: Yes, I have. For example, a few days ago I went out with my family and forgot the house keys, so we couldn’t get in. It was embarrassing because my mother called me and reminded me that I should be more careful. Since then I always check my keys before leaving.

建議: Be specific and correct grammar: state the main thing you need to remember, then give one or two reasons or consequences using linking words. Use correct verb forms (e.g. “when I don’t do my homework on time”) and avoid repetition of phrases.

範例: I need to remember to do and submit my homework every day because it helps me learn and prepares me for class. If I don’t finish it on time, my teacher reminds me and I can miss important feedback, so I try to set a study time each evening.

建議: Use natural expressions and a clear structure: start with a topic sentence describing your main method, then give specific tools and an example. Replace incorrect phrases like “setting a remember” and “Talking Turkey” with “setting reminders” and avoid starting sentences with conjunctions incorrectly.

範例: I usually remember important things by setting reminders on my phone and writing notes in a diary. For instance, I set an alarm for appointments and keep a short to‑do list so I don’t forget meetings or deadlines.

× To be honest, I am quite good at memorising things because I always organise and manage my things in a easy way that I always remember it on a right time.

✓ To be honest, I am quite good at memorising things because I always organise and manage my things in an easy way so that I remember them at the right time.

Errors: 'a easy' should be 'an easy' (article before vowel sound); 'remember it' should be 'remember them' to agree with plural 'things' (pronoun agreement); 'on a right time' should be 'at the right time' (preposition and definite article). Suggestion: Use 'an' before vowel sounds, match pronouns to the noun's number, and use 'at the right time' for timing expressions.

× Moreover, sometimes I make notes and set remembers about important dates and day which helps me to remember them.

✓ Moreover, sometimes I make notes and set reminders for important dates and days, which help me remember them.

Errors: 'set remembers' is incorrect — use the noun 'reminders'; 'important dates and day' should be plural 'days'; 'which helps me' should be 'which help me' because the relative clause refers to plural 'reminders, notes' (subject-verb agreement). Suggestion: Use correct nouns (reminder/reminders), ensure noun number matches, and make the verb agree with the plural subject.

× Yes, I vividly remember that a few days ago when my family members went to a function then I forgot the key of the home and it was a red letter day for me because I got called from my mother to not to remember the important keys of the home.

✓ Yes, I vividly remember that a few days ago when my family members went to a function, I forgot the house key, and it was a terrible day for me because my mother scolded me for forgetting the important keys to the house.

Errors: 'key of the home' is unnatural — use 'house key' or 'key to the house' (preposition/article); 'red letter day' is misused (means a good day) so 'terrible day' or 'embarrassing day' fits context; 'I got called from my mother to not to remember' is ungrammatical — intended meaning is 'my mother scolded me for forgetting' (past tense agreement and correct verb phrase). Suggestion: Use appropriate idioms, correct prepositions ('to the house'), and express reason with 'for + gerund' (for forgetting).

× Candidly speaking, I need to remember my daily homework in my daily life because it helps me to enhance my knowledge and whenever I did not done my homework on time, I got called from my teacher to not to submit homework on time.

✓ Candidly speaking, I need to remember my daily homework because it helps me enhance my knowledge, and whenever I did not do my homework on time, my teacher would call me for not submitting it on time.

Errors: 'did not done' mixes past forms — should be 'did not do' or 'had not done'; 'I got called from my teacher' is awkward — use 'my teacher called me' or 'my teacher would call me'; 'to not to submit' is incorrect infinitive use. Suggestion: Use correct past tense forms ('did not do'), natural passive/active constructions, and correct infinitive forms ('for not submitting').

× Talking Turkey, I remember most crucial things by setting a remember and writing them in my diary and notes.

✓ To be honest, I remember the most crucial things by setting reminders and writing them in my diary and notes.

Errors: 'Talking Turkey' is informal and odd here; use 'To be honest' or 'Frankly'; 'setting a remember' is incorrect — use 'setting reminders'; 'most crucial things' works but 'the most crucial things' is more natural. Suggestion: Use appropriate phrase for candidness, correct noun 'reminders', and include article 'the' when specifying a particular group.

× Because my mobile phone helps me to remember most important days, events and upcoming functions which helps me to not forget them.

✓ My mobile phone helps me remember the most important days, events, and upcoming functions, which helps me not to forget them.

Errors: Sentence begins with 'Because' creating a fragment when attached to previous sentence; include article 'the' before 'most important' for specificity; 'which helps me to not forget them' is awkward — 'which helps me not to forget them' or 'which helps me remember them' is better. Suggestion: Combine sentences properly (avoid sentence fragments), use 'the' for specific items, and place 'not' before the infinitive consistently.