记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接且内容相关，但有语法和用词小错误（如“tell”应为“tells”、“memorizing”拼写注意美/英式一致），句子可以更自然并用连接词使结构更流畅。建议用一两句主题句再加一两句具体例子，控制在3-4句内，避免冗长重复。可练习使用连词如“so”或“therefore”以及短语替换“write it down and look at it several times”。

範例: Not really — I struggle with memorising numbers. For instance, when someone tells me a phone number, I usually can’t repeat it straight away, so I write it down and review it a couple of times to memorise it.

建議: 回答包含具体事件，但表达有错误和不够连贯（如“Sperry date”应为“expiry date”或“expiry/expiration date”；句子较长且信息堆积）。建议先陈述结论句，再用1-2句说明原因和后果，注意时态和词汇准确性，使用连接词如“as a result”或“therefore”。

範例: Yes — once I forgot to check the passport expiry date before travelling. As a result, I missed my flight and had to rebook the trip at extra cost, which was very upsetting because I lost several days and money.

建議: 内容清晰且结构合理，但有少量语法错误（如“make”应为“makes”）和词形一致问题。可以使用连接词如“therefore”或“so”来增强连贯性，并补充一两个具体例子说明清单如何帮助（如例子或具体任务）。

範例: I need to remember my daily work tasks, so I use a checklist. This helps me follow the correct procedures — for example, I tick off quality-control steps to avoid mistakes and finish tasks on time.

建議: 回答表达了方法，但有拼写和语法错误（如“know down”应为“note down”，“help”应为“helps”，“oncoming”不太自然可改为“upcoming”）。建议先说方法，再补充频率和效果，使用连接词如“usually”或“therefore”，保持句子简洁明了。

範例: I usually note important things in my notebook or on my calendar and review them every evening or at the start of the week. This routine helps me remember upcoming tasks and plan how to tackle them.

× No, I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially the numbers.

✓ No, I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially numbers.

句中“the numbers”在这种泛指情形下不需要定冠词，“numbers”应作泛指复数，去掉“the”更自然。建议：当谈论一类事物或一般情况时，通常省略定冠词或使用复数形式。

× For example, if someone tell me a telephone number, I can hardly repeat it the first time, so I even write it down and look at it several times to remember it.

✓ For example, if someone tells me a telephone number, I can hardly repeat it the first time, so I even write it down and look at it several times to remember it.

从句主语是单数不定代词“someone”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“tells”。建议：遇到someone/anyone等单数代词时，动词用第三人称单数形式。

× Yes, I once forgot to check my passports in Sperry date.

✓ Yes, I once forgot to check my passport on the departure date.

原句中“passports”与后文语境不一致且“in Sperry date”不是正确表达。应为“passport”或复数视具体情况而定；“departure date”表示“出发日期”，且搭配介词用“on”。建议：使用正确名词单复数并配合正确介词。

× As a result, I missed my trip and had to pay extra to rebook flights and hotel which was quite upsetting because I lost several days on my trip and wasted money.

✓ As a result, I missed my trip and had to pay extra to rebook flights and a hotel, which was quite upsetting because I lost several days of my trip and wasted money.

“rebook flights and hotel”中“hotel”前需不定冠词“a hotel”或使用复数“hotels”。此外“several days on my trip”通常用“days of my trip”更自然。最后在“hotel”后需用逗号引导非限制性定语从句。建议：注意冠词使用并选择更地道的介词短语。

× I need to remember the tasks I must do at work.

✓ I need to remember the tasks I must do at work.

该句语法正确，无需改动。保持原句。

× My job involves meeting steps and procedures, so I keep a checklist to organize everything.

✓ My job involves meeting steps and procedures, so I keep a checklist to organize everything.

该句整体可理解，但“meeting steps”短语不太自然；若意指“会议的步骤”，应改为“meeting procedures”或“steps for meetings”。原句语法无明显主谓不一致问题。建议：根据具体含义调整名词搭配，例如“steps for meetings”。

× Using a list make my routine more efficient and help me avoid mistakes.

✓ Using a list makes my routine more efficient and helps me avoid mistakes.

主语“Using a list”是第三人称单数结构，谓语动词应加-s：“makes”“helps”。建议：注意动名词短语作为主语时，动词用第三人称单数形式。

× I usually know down important things in my notebook or on my calendar and I review them regularly every evening or at the start of the week.

✓ I usually jot down important things in my notebook or on my calendar, and I review them regularly every evening or at the start of the week.

“know down”是拼写/用词错误，正确表达应为“jot down”或“note down”。并在并列句前加逗号。建议：注意常用短语动词的拼写和用法。

× This help me remember oncoming tasks and plan how to deal with them.

✓ This helps me remember upcoming tasks and plan how to deal with them.

主语“This”为第三人称单数，谓语应为“helps”。“oncoming tasks”不如“upcoming tasks”地道。建议：动词与主语保持一致；选择更常用的形容词搭配。