记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は直接でわかりやすいですが、文法ミスや語順・単数複数の一致（"this skills"→"these skills"）があり、表現がやや不自然です。5文以内に収めつつ、トピックセンテンスの後に具体例と理由を簡潔な接続詞（for example, because, so）でつなげるとより自然になります。発音や語彙の幅も少し広げてください。

範例: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things. For example, in high school I could easily remember facts for science and history exams, so I often scored well in those subjects.

建議: 意味は伝わりますが、不自然な表現（"have ever"と"I was scored by them"）や時制・語順の誤りがあります。出来事の順序と感情を明確に述べ、接続詞（when, so, because）で流れを作ってください。また、具体的な詳細（何を忘れたのか、相手の反応）を一つ加えると説得力が増します。

範例: Yes, I once forgot an important family dinner. My parents had prepared a meal for me, but I went to a restaurant with friends instead, so they were disappointed and I felt very guilty.

建議: 良い習慣を述べていますが、記事・前置詞・不定詞の誤り（"A to do list", "what I should to do"）があります。より自然な語順で、具体的な項目や頻度（e.g. bills, appointments）を一つ加えると説得力が増します。接続詞（so, and then）を用いて理由を付け足してください。

範例: I always make a to-do list and review it every morning, so I remember appointments, deadlines and errands and don't forget important tasks.

建議: 明確で効果的な回答ですが、"cannot forget it"は強すぎて不自然なので、可能性を示す表現（"I'm less likely to forget"）に変えると自然です。さらに具体的に、どのように整理するか（use headings, checklists, reminders）を一つ加えると良いです。

範例: I usually write important things down by hand because I'm less likely to forget them; I often keep a checklist and tick items off once they're done.

× For example, when I was a high school student, I was good at science and history because the subject can use this skills.

✓ For example, when I was a high school student, I was good at science and history because those subjects allowed me to use these skills.

The original sentence miscues pronouns and number agreement. 'The subject' should be plural 'those subjects' to match 'science and history'. 'Can use this skills' is incorrect: 'skills' is plural so 'this' should be 'these', and 'can use' does not fit the past time frame; use past tense 'allowed me to use' to match 'was'. Improve by matching noun numbers and aligning verb tense with the context.

× Yes, I have ever forgotten something important.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important.

Using 'ever' with present perfect in affirmative statements is unnatural here. 'Have ever forgotten' is typically used in questions (Have you ever...). Remove 'ever' for a correct affirmative present perfect: 'I have forgotten'. Alternatively, use simple past 'I once forgot' if referring to a specific past event.

× When my parents prepared a dinner for me, I went to restaurant with my friends.

✓ When my parents prepared dinner for me, I went to a restaurant with my friends.

'A dinner' is unnecessary; 'prepared dinner' is idiomatic. 'Restaurant' needs an article: 'a restaurant'. Use articles appropriately: omit the article with general nouns like 'dinner' but include 'a' for singular countable nouns like 'restaurant'.

× I was scored by them.

✓ I was teased by them.

'Scored' is incorrect in this context. Likely intended meaning is that friends teased or made fun of the student. Replace with a correct verb such as 'teased'. Also passive voice is unusual here; active 'they teased me' is clearer. Ensure verb choice matches intended meaning.

× I regret it.

✓ I regretted it.

Context refers to a past event, so use past tense 'regretted' rather than present 'regret'. If stating a present feeling, 'I regret it' is acceptable, but given the narrative past tense, 'I regretted it' fits better. Adjust tense consistency across the story.

× I always make A to do list and I think what I should to do today in the morning.

✓ I always make a to-do list and I think about what I should do today in the morning.

Use lowercase 'a' and hyphenate 'to-do' as a compound noun: 'a to-do list'. 'Think what I should to do' is ungrammatical: add preposition 'about' after 'think' and remove extra 'to' before 'do' — correct is 'think about what I should do'. Maintain natural word order.

× I always make A to do list and I think what I should to do today in the morning.

✓ I always make a to-do list and I think about what I should do today in the morning.

As above, the verb 'think' requires the preposition 'about' when followed by a noun clause in this informal context. Also correct article and infinitive usage.

× I always write important things on paper because if I write by hand, I cannot forget it.

✓ I always write important things on paper because if I write them by hand, I cannot forget them.

Pronoun reference and number agreement: 'important things' is plural so use 'them' not 'it'. Also use 'by hand' with 'write them by hand' is acceptable. Ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.

× When my parents prepared a dinner for me, I went to restaurant with my friends. I was scored by them. I regret it.

✓ When my parents prepared dinner for me, I went to a restaurant with my friends. They teased me. I regretted it.

This groups related corrections: remove unnecessary article before 'dinner', add article for 'restaurant', replace incorrect verb 'scored' with 'teased', and make tense consistent by using past 'regretted'. Keep narrative past tense consistent.