记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve clarity and vocabulary accuracy; use a clear topic sentence, correct word choice (e.g., "repetition method"), and add one brief supporting detail with a linking word. Also avoid redundancy and filler words.

範例: Yes, I’m quite good at memorising things. I usually use a repetition method, which means I review a topic several times over a few days, so it sticks in my long-term memory.

建議: Be more coherent and specific: start with a direct answer, give one clear example and a reason, and avoid hesitations and repetition. Use linking words like "for example" and "because" to organise your reply.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once missed an important meeting because I didn’t set a reminder, and because I hadn’t reviewed my schedule, I simply forgot.

建議: Organise the answer with a topic sentence and specific examples. Use linking phrases (for example, also, additionally) and correct grammar (e.g., "at night" not "on nights"). Limit to 3–4 concise sentences to avoid rambling.

範例: I need to remember several routine tasks every day. For example, at night I soak almonds and walnuts so I must remember to take them in the morning; additionally, I need to remember to take my medicine and attend scheduled meetings.

建議: Use a clear structure: state main strategy, add one or two supporting details with linking words, and avoid awkward phrasing. Improve word choice and sentence flow (e.g., "set reminders on my phone" and "at the right time").

範例: Mostly I use repetition to memorise tasks, and I also set reminders on my phone so they alert me at the right time. Additionally, very important items tend to stay in my mind without any aid.

× Yes, I am good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorizing things.

No correction needed; sentence correctly uses the gerund 'memorizing' after 'good at'. Keep as is.

× I always choose reputation method to memorize anything.

✓ I always use a repetition method to memorize things.

The original uses incorrect word 'reputation' instead of 'repetition' and omits an article before 'repetition method'. Use 'use' rather than 'choose' for habitual technique. Suggestion: say 'use a repetition method' or 'use repetition'.

× I repeat one topic for many times and then after that I remember it for a long time.

✓ I repeat a topic many times, and then I remember it for a long time.

Change 'one topic' to 'a topic' and 'for many times' to 'many times' for natural English. Combine clauses with 'and then' and keep present simple for habitual action.

× Yes, many times I've forgotten something important.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten important things many times.

Reorder to a more natural adverb placement: 'many times' after the verb phrase. Present perfect 'have forgotten' is correct for past experiences; adjust word order for clarity.

× Uh, events sometimes some, some important meetings, some important information.

✓ For example, sometimes I forget events, important meetings, or important information.

Original is a fragment and repeats 'some'. Make it a complete sentence listing examples and use parallel structure: 'events, important meetings, or important information.'

× There are many times while I forgot the some things actually, I'm good at memorizing, but sometimes if I do not repeat things, I forget that.

✓ There have been many times when I forgot some things. Actually, I'm good at memorizing, but if I don't repeat things, I sometimes forget them.

Use 'have been' (present perfect) to refer to past occurrences up to now, and 'when' instead of 'while'. Remove extra 'the' before 'some things'. Ensure pronoun agreement: 'forget them' refers back to 'things'. Keep consistent tense and natural word order.

× On daily basis I have to remember many things.

✓ On a daily basis I have to remember many things.

Add the article 'a' in the common phrase 'on a daily basis'. Alternatively, say 'Daily, I have to remember many things.'

× For example, on nights I have to soak my nuts, almonds and walnuts.

✓ For example, at night I have to soak my nuts, almonds, and walnuts.

Use 'at night' for the habitual time expression. Include Oxford comma optionally and maintain parallel nouns.

× For that I will take in the morning.

✓ I will eat them in the morning.

Original is unclear: 'for that I will take in the morning' is ungrammatical. Use 'eat them in the morning' or 'I take them in the morning' to express consuming soaked nuts.

× Uh, my, some medicines, my important meetings, some events.

✓ I also need to remember to take some medicines, my important meetings, and some events.

Original is a fragment with commas and unclear items. Make a full sentence with verb 'remember' and parallel objects.

× On daily life we have, I have a lot of things to remember.

✓ In daily life, I have a lot of things to remember.

Use 'in daily life' not 'on daily life'. Remove extra 'we have,'. Keep subject consistent: first person 'I'.

× I usually use repetition methods.

✓ I usually use repetition methods.

No correction needed; sentence correctly uses the noun 'repetition' with 'use'. Keep plural 'methods' if multiple techniques are implied.

× The most of the time I use repetition method to remember things.

✓ Most of the time, I use the repetition method to remember things.

Remove 'the' before 'most of the time' or keep as 'Most of the time'. If referring to a specific method, include 'the' before 'repetition method'. Add commas for clarity.

× Sometimes I also add reminders in my mobile.

✓ Sometimes I also add reminders on my mobile phone.

Use 'on' rather than 'in' for adding reminders to a device, and 'mobile phone' or 'phone' is more natural than 'mobile' alone in some dialects.

× So those reminders at perfect time they remind me that I have to do these things.

✓ Those reminders notify me at the right time that I have to do these things.

Original word order is awkward. Use 'notify me at the right time' or 'remind me at the right time' and avoid repeating 'remind'. Keep clause 'that I have to do these things.'

× But some very important things are always stuck in my mind so I don't forget those.

✓ But some very important things are always stuck in my mind, so I don't forget them.

Use 'them' instead of 'those' to refer back to 'things' in the same sentence. Add a comma before 'so' for compound sentence.

× Some of the.

✓ Some of them.

Original is an incomplete fragment. Complete it to 'Some of them' or 'Some of those I remember' depending on intended meaning.