记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct grammar, and use clear linking and specific examples. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I’m good at remembering names.”), avoid comparisons like “more than ordinary people,” and correct errors (word order, verb forms, articles). Add one specific example and a brief explanation of your method.

範例: Yes, I’m good at remembering names. For example, when I meet someone for the first time I repeat their name in my head and associate it with a visual detail, so I rarely forget it. This technique helps people notice that I remember them later.

建議: Answer directly and honestly; avoid contradictions and filler words. Use a clear brief story in the past tense, with linking words (for example, however, so) and one or two specific details (time/place). Remove hesitations and repetitions.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important once. For example, I missed a meeting with a friend last year because I misread the meeting time, so I arrived thirty minutes late and learned to double-check times.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and then two specific categories with brief examples. Use correct collocations (daily life, work tasks, meeting times) and linking words (for example, also) to structure the answer.

範例: In daily life I need to remember both personal and work-related things. For example, personally I remember appointments and grocery items, and at work I keep track of tasks and meeting times to stay organized.

建議: Use clear, correct sentences and avoid unclear phrases. Start with a direct method statement, then give one or two specific details about how you use the method (apps, reminders, order of priorities) and a result. Remove fillers like “uh” and awkward phrasing.

範例: I usually make a list and set reminders on my phone to remember important things. For example, I create a task list each morning and set calendar alerts for deadlines, which helps me avoid forgetting tasks.

× I am quite good at memorizing things more than the ordinary people.

✓ I am quite good at memorizing things compared to ordinary people.

Use of 'the ordinary people' is incorrect here; 'ordinary people' without 'the' and using 'compared to' fits the comparative meaning. Also avoid redundant 'more than' with 'good at'.

× whenever I see the person where the very first time, I will try to memorize the names of them and some many of the people get surprised that I remember their name even though it would be the same.

✓ Whenever I meet a person for the first time, I try to memorize their name, and many people are surprised that I remember it.

Multiple preposition and word choice errors: 'see the person where the very first time' should be 'meet a person for the first time'. Use singular 'a person' and 'for the first time' (preposition). 'Names of them' should be 'their name' to match singular. 'Some many of the people' is ungrammatical; use 'many people'. 'Are surprised' fits present simple. Use 'it' to refer to 'name'.

× I've never forgotten important things, unfortunately.

✓ I've never forgotten any important things, fortunately/unfortunately (depending on intended meaning).

Sentence is mostly correct but needs 'any' before 'important things' for natural negative construction. Also 'unfortunately' contradicts 'never forgotten' so choose appropriate adverb; maintain consistency in meaning.

× For example, I was supposed to meet up with my friend at a specific meeting point, but I was careful enough.

✓ For example, I was supposed to meet my friend at a specific meeting point, but I was not careful enough.

Use 'meet' rather than 'meet up with' is acceptable but fine; main error: 'was careful enough' contradicts intended meaning; negative 'not' is required. Also remove extra 'up' optional. Past tense 'was supposed' and 'was not careful' are consistent.

× I was not careful enough to, you know, get there in time.

✓ I was not careful enough to get there on time.

Unnecessary filler 'you know' should be removed in formal correction. Use 'on time' instead of 'in time' for planned appointments. Structure 'not careful enough to get there on time' is correct.

× There are lots of things to remember in my daily lives, including my daily situation or business situations.

✓ There are lots of things to remember in my daily life, including personal and business matters.

Use singular 'daily life' not 'daily lives' when speaking about oneself. 'Situation' pluralization and word choice improved to 'personal and business matters' for clarity.

× For the business situations, I will have to remember what tasks I should achieve or on what time I should join the meetings.

✓ For business situations, I have to remember which tasks I should complete and what time I should join meetings.

Use 'business situations' without 'the'. 'Will have to' is future but present 'have to' or 'need to' is more natural for habitual. 'What tasks I should achieve' should be 'which tasks I should complete'. 'On what time' is incorrect; use 'what time'. Remove article before 'meetings'.

× In order to remember important things, I will try to make a list of them.

✓ In order to remember important things, I try to make a list of them.

For habitual actions, present simple 'I try' is preferred over 'I will try'. The original used future incorrectly for a habitual strategy.

× By making the rest of them, I can stay organized and waste time of recalling it.

✓ By making a list of them, I can stay organized and avoid wasting time trying to recall them.

'By making the rest of them' is unclear; use 'a list of them'. 'Waste time of recalling it' is ungrammatical; correct expression is 'avoid wasting time trying to recall them'. Pronoun agreement: 'them' matches plural 'things'.

× And also I will never miss the, uh, important things as well.

✓ I will never miss important things either.

Remove filler 'uh' and redundant connectors 'and also'... 'as well' and 'either' serve same function; choose 'either'. Use concise structure 'I will never miss important things' or 'I don't miss important things'.