记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tránh lỗi như "live a strong impression" nên là "leave a strong impression". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể rút gọn để tránh lặp lại ý.

範例: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to forget quickly. However, I usually remember unique experiences, like meeting an extroverted person or receiving a special gift, because they leave a strong impression on me.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ "I would be get the best score" nên là "I wouldn't get the best score". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có một số lỗi nhỏ và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc giữa các câu. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

範例: Yes, I once forgot to bring my calculator during a final exam, which was very important. Because of this, I felt stressed and worried that I wouldn't get a good score. Since then, I always double-check my belongings to avoid forgetting anything important.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "Staying organizer" nên là "staying organized" và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my university schedule carefully because I have to attend classes and submit assignments on time. Staying organized helps me manage my responsibilities and avoid missing important deadlines. This way, I can keep up with my studies and reduce stress.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên chú ý cấu trúc câu và tránh những câu không liên quan hoặc không rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: To remember important things, I usually repeat the information step by step. For example, when I learn new vocabulary, I practice it daily by writing sentences and having conversations with my friends. This helps reinforce my memory and remember more effectively.

× However, I usually remember some things such as meeting an extroverted person or receiving unique gift since they live a strong impression on me.

✓ However, I usually remember some things such as meeting an extroverted person or receiving a unique gift since they leave a strong impression on me.

The verb 'live' is incorrectly used; the correct past participle form is 'leave' in this context. Also, 'unique gift' needs an article 'a' before it. The verb 'leave' means to cause or create an impression, which fits the sentence meaning.

× Absolutely yes. I remember 1. During my final exam I forgot to bring my calculator which was very important for the test.

✓ Absolutely yes. I remember once. During my final exam, I forgot to bring my calculator which was very important for the test.

The phrase 'I remember 1' is incorrect; it should be 'I remember once' to indicate a single past event. Also, a comma is needed after 'exam' for clarity.

× Because of this I feel very stressed and worried that I would be get the best score.

✓ Because of this, I felt very stressed and worried that I would not get the best score.

The modal verb phrase 'would be get' is incorrect; it should be 'would not get' to express the negative possibility. Also, the tense should be past 'felt' to match the past event.

× Since then I always double check my best before then to avoid forgetting anything important.

✓ Since then, I always double-check my belongings before exams to avoid forgetting anything important.

The phrase 'double check my best before then' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'double-check my belongings before exams' to make sense. Also, 'double-check' is hyphenated as a verb, and a comma is needed after 'Since then'.

× Staying organizer helped me manage my responsibility and avoid missing important life.

✓ Staying organized helped me manage my responsibilities and avoid missing important events in life.

'Staying organizer' is incorrect; it should be 'staying organized' (adjective). 'Responsibility' should be plural 'responsibilities' to match the context. 'Important life' is incomplete; it should be 'important events in life'.

× This way, I can keep up my study and reduce tests such as.

✓ This way, I can keep up with my studies and reduce stress from tests.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Keep up my study' should be 'keep up with my studies'. 'Reduce tests such as' is incomplete; it should be 'reduce stress from tests' or similar.

× To remember important thing, I usually repeat information step by step.

✓ To remember important things, I usually repeat information step by step.

'Important thing' should be plural 'important things' to match the general statement.

× Are this artist you of the world happier? Reinforce my memory and remember more effectively.

✓ I reinforce my memory and remember more effectively.

The sentence 'Are this artist you of the world happier?' is nonsensical and unrelated; it should be removed. The following sentence is incomplete and should be combined properly.