记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言有些重复且不够自然。建议避免重复表达相同意思，使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. In fact, I tend to forget things quite quickly. My boyfriend even jokes that I have the memory of a goldfish because I can forget things within minutes.

建議: 回答内容清晰，但句子结构较简单，且部分表达不够流畅。建议使用更连贯的句子结构，并丰富细节，使回答更自然。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, a few years ago, I went to a concert in Kaohsiung, but after arriving, I suddenly realized that I had forgotten to bring my Concerta medication.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇，表达不够准确。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇和句式，同时注意语法，使表达更自然。

範例: I need to remember to take my medicine every day because I have a specific allergy. However, I often forget, so I set an alarm to remind myself to take it on time.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意冠词使用，句子结构和逻辑连接词的运用，使表达更流畅自然。

範例: As I mentioned earlier, setting an alarm is the best way to remind me. Another method I use is making a to-do list every morning and sticking it on the fridge so I can see it throughout the day.

× My boyfriend often called me goldfish because my memory ability.

✓ My boyfriend often called me a goldfish because of my memory ability.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“goldfish”是可数名词，表示一种动物，前面需要加不定冠词。

× after I arrived Kaohsiung, I suddenly realized I forgot to take my Concerta.

✓ after I arrived in Kaohsiung, I suddenly realized I forgot to take my Concerta.

动词“arrive”后面需要加介词“in”表示到达某地。

× I have some specific specific allergy, but I always forget this.

✓ I have some specific allergies, but I always forget this.

“allergy”应使用复数形式“allergies”，因为通常指多种过敏反应。

× So to figure it out I set a clock every day for myself to remind taking medicine.

✓ So to figure it out I set an alarm every day for myself to remind me to take medicine.

“set a clock”不合适，应该用“set an alarm”；“remind taking medicine”结构错误，应该是“remind me to take medicine”。

× setting a an alarm is a best way to remind me.

✓ setting an alarm is the best way to remind me.

“a an”重复错误，应为“an”；“a best way”应为“the best way”，因为这里指的是最好的方法。

× Another method is I will take A to do list in the morning and stick this paper on my fridge that I can remind me.

✓ Another method is I will make a to-do list in the morning and stick this paper on my fridge so that it can remind me.

“take a to do list”表达不正确，应为“make a to-do list”；“that I can remind me”结构错误，应改为“so that it can remind me”。