记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 문장 연결이 조금 더 명확하면 좋겠습니다. 예를 들어, 'To overcome this' 대신 'Therefore'나 'As a result' 같은 연결어를 사용하여 문장 간 논리적 흐름을 강화하세요.

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. Therefore, I usually use a task tracking application on my phone, which helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting important tasks. This method has made me more productive and less stressed.

建議: 'I have gotten an important deadline'는 문법적으로 부적절합니다. 'I missed an important deadline'로 수정하고, 문장 연결을 위해 'because'나 'so' 같은 연결어를 활용해 보세요.

範例: Yes, I missed an important deadline once when I was in high school because I didn't realize the assignment was due soon. So, I politely asked my teacher if I could have an extension.

建議: 답변이 구체적이고 잘 구성되어 있습니다. 다만, 'starting and doing household chores' 대신 'starting and completing household chores'로 표현하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

範例: I need to remember the tasks I have to complete within a day, such as starting and completing household chores. For example, I have to study every day to improve my skills and prepare for exams. Remembering these things helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

建議: 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'As I'm not good at remember'는 'As I'm not good at remembering'로 수정해야 하며, 'write my all the tasks'는 'write all my tasks'로 고쳐야 합니다. 또한, 문장 연결을 위해 'Moreover'나 'In addition' 같은 연결어를 사용하세요.

範例: As I'm not good at remembering important things, I usually use task tracking applications on my phone. Moreover, I sometimes write all my tasks in my notebook by hand, which makes it easier for me to remember.

× Yes, I have gotten an important deadline once when I was in high school.

✓ Yes, I missed an important deadline once when I was in high school.

The verb 'gotten' is incorrectly used here. The correct verb to express failing to meet a deadline is 'missed'. 'Gotten' is the past participle of 'get' and does not fit the intended meaning in this context.

× As I'm not good at remember important things well, I usually utilize task tracking applications on my phone.

✓ As I'm not good at remembering important things well, I usually utilize task tracking applications on my phone.

After the preposition 'at', the verb should be in the gerund form '-ing'. Therefore, 'remember' should be changed to 'remembering' to be grammatically correct.

× Additionally, I sometimes write my all the tasks on my notebook by hand, which makes me easy to remember.

✓ Additionally, I sometimes write all my tasks in my notebook by hand, which makes it easy for me to remember.

The phrase 'my all the tasks' is incorrect; the correct order is 'all my tasks'. Also, 'on my notebook' should be 'in my notebook' because we write inside a notebook. Finally, 'makes me easy to remember' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it easy for me to remember' to properly express the idea.