记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және кейбір сөздерді дұрыс қолданбағансыз. Мысалы, 'datas' орнына 'data' және 'bad in it at all' орнына 'not good at it' деп айту керек. Сонымен қатар, жауапты қысқаша және нақты етіп, артық сөздерді алып тастаңыз. Мысалы, 'If it is about data and events, I am not good at memorising numbers, but I enjoy memorising song lyrics.'

範例: It depends on the type of information. I am not good at memorising numbers or dates, but I enjoy memorising song lyrics because I like music.

建議: Жауабыңызда сөйлем құрылымы күрделі және кейбір сөздер дұрыс қолданылмаған. Мысалы, 'all days long' орнына 'all day long' деп айту керек. Жауабыңызды қысқаша және нақты етіп, байланысты сөздерді қолданыңыз. Мысалы, 'I sometimes forget small details, but I usually remember important events because I think about them a lot.'

範例: Yes, I sometimes forget small details, but I rarely forget important things because I keep thinking about them all day.

建議: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық және лексикалық қателер бар. Мысалы, 'when the times comes' орнына 'when the time comes', 'before my parents came' орнына 'before my parents come' деп айту керек. Жауабыңызды нақты және логикалық байланысты етіп құрыңыз. Мысалы, 'In my daily life, I need to remember simple tasks such as locking the door, turning off the oven, and washing the dishes before my parents arrive.'

範例: In my daily routine, I need to remember simple things like locking the door before leaving, turning off the oven when cooking is done, and washing the dishes before my parents come home.

建議: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық және сөз қолдану қателері бар. Мысалы, 'remember memorizes' дұрыс емес, 'are automatically memorised' деп айту керек. Сондай-ақ, сөйлемдерді қысқаша және түсінікті етіп құрыңыз. Мысалы, 'I don't try hard to remember important things because they naturally stay in my mind due to my anxiety and overthinking.'

範例: I don't need to make an effort to remember important things because they naturally stay in my mind, probably because I tend to overthink and feel anxious.

× If it about some datas and events, then I'm bad in it at all just because I don't want to remember any numbers in my life.

✓ If it is about some data and events, then I'm bad at it at all just because I don't want to remember any numbers in my life.

The word 'datas' is incorrect because 'data' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, the verb 'is' is missing after 'If it'. The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to skill or ability. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy.

× If it about some datas and events, then I'm bad in it at all just because I don't want to remember any numbers in my life.

✓ If it is about some data and events, then I'm bad at it at all just because I don't want to remember any numbers in my life.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'If it'. This is a sentence structure error involving the present participle form. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure.

× then I'm bad in it at all just because I don't want to remember any numbers in my life.

✓ then I'm bad at it at all just because I don't want to remember any numbers in my life.

The correct preposition to express ability or skill is 'at', not 'in'. Using 'bad at' is the correct collocation.

× If it about some datas and events, then I'm bad in it at all just because I don't want to remember any numbers in my life.

✓ If it is about some data and events, then I'm bad at it at all just because I don't want to remember any numbers in my life.

The word 'datas' is incorrect; 'data' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.

× If it about some datas and events, then I'm bad in it at all just because I don't want to remember any numbers in my life.

✓ If it is about some data and events, then I'm bad at it at all just because I don't want to remember any numbers in my life.

The verb 'is' is required for the third person singular subject 'it'.

× I just like memorizing the words.

✓ I just like memorizing words.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary here because 'words' is general, not specific. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× Of course, as the simple person, it's kind of normal for me to forget some things, but I don't think that I have forgotten anything significant, because if some for example important event is going to occur, then I will be thinking about this event all days long, but I can forget some details.

✓ Of course, as a simple person, it's kind of normal for me to forget some things, but I don't think that I have forgotten anything significant, because if, for example, an important event is going to occur, then I will be thinking about this event all day long, but I can forget some details.

The phrase 'as the simple person' is incorrect; 'a simple person' is correct. Also, 'some for example important event' is awkward; it should be 'for example, an important event'. 'All days long' should be 'all day long'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× if some for example important event is going to occur

✓ if, for example, an important event is going to occur

The article 'an' is needed before 'important event' because it is singular and starts with a vowel sound. Also, commas are needed around 'for example' as a parenthetical phrase.

× I have nothing unusual to remember in my daily routine.

✓ I have nothing unusual to remember in my daily routine.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× It's kind of little things like locking the door before leaving home, or turning off the oven when the times comes and washing the dishes before my parents came or putting on things.

✓ It's kind of little things like locking the door before leaving home, turning off the oven when the time comes, washing the dishes before my parents come, or putting things away.

'The times comes' should be 'the time comes' (singular). 'My parents came' should be 'my parents come' to match present tense. 'Putting on things' is unclear; 'putting things away' is more natural. Also, remove 'or' before 'turning off' to keep parallel structure.

× washing the dishes before my parents came

✓ washing the dishes before my parents come

The verb 'came' is past tense, but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'come' is appropriate.

× I don't make any efforts to remember some important things because of my anxiety and overthinking quality.

✓ I don't make any effort to remember important things because of my anxiety and tendency to overthink.

'Make any efforts' should be 'make any effort' (uncountable). 'Some important things' is better as 'important things' for generalization. 'Overthinking quality' is unnatural; 'tendency to overthink' is clearer.

× These important things are just automatically remember memorizes in my head, stuck in my head I can say.

✓ These important things are just automatically remembered in my head, stuck in my head I can say.

The verbs 'remember' and 'memorizes' are incorrectly used. The passive past participle 'remembered' is correct here to indicate that the things are retained automatically.

× So I don't need to put any effort for that.

✓ So I don't need to put any effort into that.

The correct preposition after 'put effort' is 'into', not 'for'.