Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
And we ought to be honest, I'm not very good at memorize things except badly in the study. You know, there are a lot of knowledge or details needs to remember, but I'm not very good at. But I found I'm good at remember the daily.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Well, I never forgotten something important because I have a good habit to remark the important days in the calendar in advance. I think it can help me know.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
Well, there are a lot of things that I need to remember. Start from the morning. I need to remember when to go to the office and after. After arriving the office I need to remember the important things I need.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
Well, I prefer to taking the notes on my calendar in case I forgot important things or meetings and I think it's a good habit for me, especially for the important occasion.
Are you good at memorising things?
分數: 50.0建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“memorize things except badly in the study”表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构,直接回答问题,并用连词连接句子,使表达更流畅。
範例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially when it comes to studying. However, I find it easier to remember daily tasks and routines.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中时态使用不当,如“never forgotten”应为“never forgotten”。建议使用正确时态,并补充具体细节说明如何使用日历帮助记忆。
範例: I have never forgotten anything important because I always mark important dates on my calendar in advance. This helps me stay organized and remember important events.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答内容重复且不够具体,句子结构不完整。建议直接回答问题,提供具体例子,并使用连词使句子连贯。
範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work schedule, meetings, and important tasks. For example, I have to remember when to leave for the office and what assignments I need to complete.
How do you remember important things?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误,如“prefer to taking”应为“prefer to take”。建议使用正确语法,并详细说明记笔记的具体方法和效果。
範例: I prefer to take notes on my calendar to avoid forgetting important things or meetings. This habit helps me stay organized, especially during important occasions.
× I'm not very good at memorize things except badly in the study.
✓ I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially in studying.
动词短语 'good at' 后面应接动名词形式,不能用动词原形。这里 'memorize' 应改为 'memorizing'。
× there are a lot of knowledge or details needs to remember
✓ there is a lot of knowledge or many details that need to be remembered
'knowledge' 是不可数名词,使用单数动词 'is';'details' 是可数复数,动词用复数形式 'need',且需要加关系代词 'that' 和被动语态 'be remembered'。
× But I found I'm good at remember the daily.
✓ But I found I'm good at remembering daily things.
'good at' 后应接动名词,'remember' 应改为 'remembering'。
× I never forgotten something important
✓ I have never forgotten something important
完成时态应使用助动词 'have' + 过去分词 'forgotten',缺少助动词 'have'。
× I have a good habit to remark the important days in the calendar in advance.
✓ I have a good habit of marking important days on the calendar in advance.
'habit' 后应接介词短语 'of + 动名词','remark' 用错,应为 'mark',表示标记。
× I think it can help me know.
✓ I think it can help me remember.
'help me know' 不合适,应该用 'help me remember' 表达帮助记住的意思。
× Start from the morning.
✓ Starting from the morning,
句子不完整,应改为现在分词短语引导的状语。
× After arriving the office I need to remember the important things I need.
✓ After arriving at the office, I need to remember the important things I need.
'arriving' 后应接介词 'at' 表示到达某地。
× I prefer to taking the notes on my calendar in case I forgot important things or meetings
✓ I prefer taking notes on my calendar in case I forget important things or meetings
'prefer' 后可直接接动名词,'to taking' 应改为 'taking';'forgot' 应用现在时 'forget',因为是一般现在时表达习惯。
× taking the notes on my calendar
✓ taking notes on my calendar
'notes' 前不需要定冠词 'the',因为这里泛指笔记。