记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. Sometimes, I forget important tasks or even some memories from my childhood.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and repetition. Try to use past tense correctly and avoid repeating words. Also, provide a clear and concise response with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Last week, I had an important meeting for my company, but because of my hectic schedule, I forgot about it. This shows that my memory is not very reliable.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more organized and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my diet plan and various tasks such as doing my school homework and going for a run. There are many small tasks I have to keep track of every day.

建議: Your answer is clear but contains some errors and awkward expressions. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure, and try to be more concise.

範例: I remember important things by writing them on small notes and typing them into my phone. This way, I don't forget my tasks, and my phone helps me a lot.

× No, I'm not that good in memorizing things.

✓ No, I'm not that good at memorizing things.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. The phrase 'good at' is used to indicate skill or ability in something.

× Sometimes I got gotten forgotten some memories of my childhood and some important tasks that I have to do.

✓ Sometimes I have forgotten some memories of my childhood and some important tasks that I have to do.

The phrase 'got gotten forgotten' is incorrect. The present perfect tense 'have forgotten' is appropriate here to indicate past actions with relevance to the present.

× Last last week I I have to go for important meeting for my company and due to my hectic schedule I does not remember the meeting.

✓ Last week I had to go to an important meeting for my company and due to my hectic schedule I did not remember the meeting.

The sentence refers to a past event, so past tense verbs 'had to go' and 'did not remember' should be used. Also, 'does not' is incorrect for past tense; it should be 'did not'. Additionally, 'go for important meeting' should be 'go to an important meeting'.

× So I am not good in memorizing things and my memory is very low.

✓ So I am not good at memorizing things and my memory is very low.

Again, the correct preposition with 'good' is 'at', not 'in'.

× I need to remember my diet plan in my daily routine and all the tasks that I have to do.

✓ I need to remember my diet plan as part of my daily routine and all the tasks that I have to do.

The phrase 'in my daily routine' is awkward here. Using 'as part of my daily routine' is clearer and more natural.

× Like I have to do my school homework, I have to do go running and there are too many small tasks that I have to remember every day.

✓ Like, I have to do my school homework, I have to go running, and there are many small tasks that I have to remember every day.

The phrase 'I have to do go running' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to go running'. Also, 'too many' implies excessiveness, but 'many' is more appropriate here.

× So I remember important things by writing them on a small jets and I also use my phone keypad to type the important things that I have to do so I cannot forget them.

✓ So I remember important things by writing them on small notes and I also use my phone keypad to type the important things that I have to do so I cannot forget them.

The word 'jets' is incorrect; it should be 'notes'. Also, 'a small jets' is grammatically incorrect because 'jets' is plural and 'a' is singular.