记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'memory the article' instead of 'memorise articles'. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing clear supporting details. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific examples, using linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I think my memorising skills depend on the type of information. For instance, I find it easier to remember English vocabulary because I practise regularly, but I struggle with memorising long poems or articles.

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and contains some awkward phrasing. Avoid repeating words like 'definitely' multiple times and improve sentence structure for natural flow. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise.

範例: To be honest, I have never forgotten anything important because I always use my smartphone's reminder app to keep track of assignments and tasks, which helps me stay organised.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes, such as 'English of vocabulary' and 'my daily pressure is huge'. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, avoid vague phrases and explain your points with specific details and linking words.

範例: Recently, I have been preparing for an English test, so I need to remember vocabulary and sentence structures every day, which can be quite stressful.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but repetitive with the word 'important' and 'definitely'. Try to vary your vocabulary and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, clarify your methods with more specific details to make your answer more effective.

範例: It depends on the situation. For important appointments or deadlines, I use my smartphone to set reminders. However, for learning important information, I revise it repeatedly until I memorise it well.

× Actually it depends on the situation and I don't have excellent aptitude and potential to memory the article and poetry, but I think my ability and memory ability of English vocabulary is excellent.

✓ Actually, it depends on the situation and I don't have excellent aptitude and potential to memorise articles and poetry, but I think my ability and memory for English vocabulary is excellent.

The verb 'memory' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'memorise'. Also, 'article' should be plural 'articles' to match the context. 'Memory ability of English vocabulary' is awkward; 'memory for English vocabulary' is more natural.

× And to be honest, never, because if I have important things and important assignment, I definitely record these things on my smartphone reminder application.

✓ To be honest, never, because if I have important things and important assignments, I definitely record these things on my smartphone reminder application.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and unnecessary here. Also, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to agree with 'things' and the context.

× And it definitely as this application definitely reminder me so I never forget the important things.

✓ And this application definitely reminds me, so I never forget important things.

The phrase 'as this application definitely reminder me' is incorrect. The verb 'reminder' should be 'reminds', and the preposition 'as' is unnecessary. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Actually because in recent months I need to prepare my ayat test, so every day I need to remember the English of vocabulary and syntax in some sentences.

✓ Actually, because in recent months I need to prepare for my ayat test, so every day I need to remember English vocabulary and syntax in some sentences.

The phrase 'the English of vocabulary' is incorrect; it should be 'English vocabulary'. Also, 'prepare my ayat test' should be 'prepare for my ayat test' to use the correct preposition.

× Actually because in recent months I need to prepare my ayat test, so every day I need to remember the English of vocabulary and syntax in some sentences.

✓ Actually, because in recent months I need to prepare for my ayat test, so every day I need to remember English vocabulary and syntax in some sentences.

The verb 'prepare' requires the preposition 'for' when referring to preparing for a test.

× So I think my daily pressure is huge.

✓ So I think my daily workload is huge.

The word 'pressure' is uncountable and not typically described as 'huge' in this context. 'Workload' better expresses the intended meaning of having many tasks or responsibilities.

× If I need to remember some important schedule, important thing and important deadlines, I definitely record it on my smartphone.

✓ If I need to remember some important schedules, important things, and important deadlines, I definitely record them on my smartphone.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural nouns 'schedules', 'things', and 'deadlines'. The correct pronoun is 'them' to match the plural.

× But if I need to remember some important knowledge, I definitely reset it again and again until I really remember it.

✓ But if I need to remember some important knowledge, I definitely repeat it again and again until I really remember it.

The verb 'reset' is incorrect in this context; 'repeat' is the appropriate verb when referring to reviewing knowledge multiple times.