记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，例如 "memorize" 應為 "memorising"，以及時態錯誤。建議你使用正確的時態和詞形，並避免重複表達。可以嘗試用更自然的句子結構來表達你的想法。

範例: No, I don't think I'm good at memorising things. About a year ago, I had a car accident, and since then, I find it harder to remember things.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和重複詞語，且句子結構不夠清晰。建議你使用正確的時態和語法，並避免重複。可以用更具體的例子來說明情況，使回答更有說服力。

範例: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, when my mom asks me to do something, I sometimes forget the most important tasks, which makes her upset.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，例如 "forgot" 應為 "forget"，且句子結構可以更流暢。建議你使用正確的時態和連接詞，使回答更自然且有條理。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to clock in and out at work. I usually remember to clock in, but I often forget to clock out when I leave, which is very important.

建議: 你的回答表達清楚，但有些語法錯誤和用詞不當，例如 "the things" 應為 "them"。建議你使用更簡潔且正確的句子結構，並使用連接詞使回答更流暢。

範例: If I need to do something immediately, I just do it right away to avoid forgetting. However, if it's for later, I set an alarm to remind me.

× I don't think that I'm good at memorize things.

✓ I don't think that I'm good at memorizing things.

The verb 'memorize' after 'good at' should be in the '-ing' form to function as a gerund. So 'memorize' should be changed to 'memorizing'. (中文說明：在 'good at' 之後，動詞需用動名詞形式，因此 'memorize' 應改為 'memorizing'。)

× one years ago I have a car accident

✓ one year ago I had a car accident

'One' refers to a singular quantity, so 'years' should be singular 'year'. Also, the past event requires past tense 'had' instead of 'have'. (中文說明：'one' 是單數，應搭配單數名詞 'year'，且描述過去事件需用過去式 'had'。)

× I have a car accident

✓ I had a car accident

The event happened in the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'had' instead of present tense 'have'. (中文說明：描述過去事件時，動詞需用過去式 'had'。)

× this caused me umm, get hard to memorize things.

✓ this caused me, umm, to have difficulty memorizing things.

After 'caused me', the verb should be in infinitive form 'to have' or a noun phrase. Also, 'get hard to memorize' is incorrect; better to say 'have difficulty memorizing'. (中文說明：'cause' 後接受詞時，動詞需用不定詞或名詞片語，且 'get hard to memorize' 不正確，應改為 'have difficulty memorizing'。)

× I have a lot of experience.

✓ I have a lot of experiences.

When referring to multiple instances, 'experiences' (plural) is more appropriate than 'experience' (uncountable) in this context. (中文說明：此處指多次經驗，應用複數 'experiences'。)

× Every time my mom asked me to do something, I always forgot the the the most important things that I have to do.

✓ Every time my mom asks me to do something, I always forget the most important things that I have to do.

The habitual action should be in present tense 'asks' and 'forget' to indicate repeated behavior. Also, remove repeated 'the'. (中文說明：描述習慣性行為時，動詞用現在式，且刪除重複的 'the'。)

× So my mom always mad at me when I forgot something.

✓ So my mom is always mad at me when I forget something.

Use present tense 'is' for 'mom is always mad' and 'forget' for habitual action. 'Mad' needs a verb 'is'. (中文說明：'mad' 為形容詞，需搭配動詞 'is'，且描述習慣用現在式。)

× I have to clock in and out every day, but I usually remember I have to clock in.

✓ I have to clock in and out every day, but I usually remember to clock in.

After 'remember', the verb should be in infinitive form 'to clock in'. (中文說明：'remember' 後接動詞時，需用不定詞 'to clock in'。)

× But when I leave my working place I always forgot to clock out.

✓ But when I leave my workplace I always forget to clock out.

'Leave' is present tense, so 'forgot' should be present tense 'forget' to match habitual action. Also, 'working place' is better as 'workplace'. (中文說明：描述習慣性行為時，動詞用現在式，且 'working place' 改為常用詞 'workplace'。)

× So this is the most important thing I have to do daily routine.

✓ So this is the most important thing I have to do in my daily routine.

Add preposition 'in' and possessive 'my' before 'daily routine' to make the phrase correct. (中文說明：'daily routine' 前需加介系詞 'in' 及所有格 'my'。)

× If that thing is we have to do it right now, I will just do it immediately to make sure that I won't forget to do the things.

✓ If that thing is something we have to do right now, I will just do it immediately to make sure that I won't forget to do it.

Clarify the subject by adding 'something'. Also, 'the things' should be singular 'it' to refer to the specific task. (中文說明：需加 'something' 使句子完整，且 'the things' 改為單數 'it'。)

× But if The thing is going to be doing at some time, I will just set the alarm to make sure that my alarm will remind me to do that things.

✓ But if the thing is going to be done at some time, I will just set the alarm to make sure that my alarm will remind me to do that thing.

Use passive form 'be done' instead of 'be doing'. Also, 'that things' should be singular 'that thing'. (中文說明：此處應用被動語態 'be done'，且 'that things' 改為單數 'that thing'。)