记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中出现了词汇错误（'embracing' 应为 'memorising'），且有较多的填充词（如 'uh', 'umm'），影响流畅性。建议注意用词准确，减少口头语，并且回答时直接回应问题，避免重复。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I need to remember someone's name or new English words, I usually repeat them several times to help myself recall.

建議: 回答中时态和表达不够准确，且句子结构较简单。建议使用正确的时态，避免重复表达，并且可以增加细节使回答更具体。

範例: Yes, I once forgot the time of my class during college. It happened because I didn't check my schedule carefully that day, which made me late.

建議: 句子结构不完整，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议练习完整句子结构，使用正确的介词和连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments with others and the time I set aside for studying.

建議: 回答中出现了不连贯和重复的表达（如 'I usually list a list. To push.'），影响理解。建议简洁明了地表达方法，避免无意义的重复。

範例: I remember important things by writing them down in my schedule or notebook. This helps me keep track of my tasks and appointments.

× No, I'm not good at embracing things.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorising things.

学生将'memorising'错误地说成了'embracing'，这两个词意思不同，导致表达不准确。应使用'memorising'表示记忆。

× when I need to remember, uh, someone's name or the English words I have to repeat it for.

✓ when I need to remember someone's name or English words, I have to repeat them.

原句结构混乱，'repeat it for'不符合英语表达习惯，应调整为'repeat them'，使句子通顺。

× Yes, I have forgotten my class time when I was in my college this afternoon, I forgot the schedule.

✓ Yes, I forgot my class time this afternoon when I was in college; I forgot the schedule.

使用了现在完成时'have forgotten'与具体时间'this afternoon'不搭配，应使用一般过去时'forgot'。另外，'in my college'应为'in college'。

× In my daily life, I need to remember the time what I appointment with others and my study time when I need to.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember the time when I have appointments with others and my study time when needed.

'the time what I appointment'结构错误，应使用'the time when I have appointments'，'appointment'应为复数形式，且动词形式需正确。

× I usually list a list. To push.

✓ I usually make a list to remind myself.

原句断句错误且表达不清，'list a list'重复且'To push'无意义，应改为'I usually make a list to remind myself'，表达更准确。