记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使用更准确的词汇表达记忆力差的情况。

範例: No, I'm not good at memorising things. Even now, I often forget important items like my wallet or phone when I go out.

建議: 回答内容较为完整，但语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用更连贯的句子，注意时态和冠词的使用，避免重复和口语填充词。

範例: Yes, I have. Last winter holiday, my family and I travelled to Australia. We arrived at the airport two hours early, but I realized I had forgotten my passport and had to go back home to get it.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，存在重复和语法错误。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

範例: As a college student, I need to remember my class schedule and important meetings. For example, today I have an important meeting with my tutor, so I make a plan to remember it.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地说明记忆方法，避免口语填充词，使用连贯的句子。

範例: I usually make a list to remember important things. Nowadays, I use apps on my phone because they are very convenient and helpful.

× I am not good at memory things uh weather when I was a child or nowadays my memory is so bad and I sometimes would forget some important item, for example my wallet or my phone when I need to go out to.

✓ I am not good at memorising things. Whether when I was a child or nowadays, my memory is so bad and I sometimes forget some important items, for example my wallet or my phone when I need to go out.

这里“memory things”应改为“memorising things”，因为“memory”是名词，不能直接修饰“things”，应使用动名词形式“memorising”。另外，“item”应使用复数形式“items”，因为指的是多个物品。

× Just last winter holiday and my family and I had travelled to the Australia.

✓ Just last winter holiday, my family and I travelled to Australia.

这里“had travelled”使用了过去完成时，但句子中没有其他过去的时间点需要对比，简单过去时“travelled”更合适。另外，“the Australia”中“the”不应该出现，国家名“Australia”前一般不加冠词。

× Just last winter holiday and my family and I had travelled to the Australia.

✓ Just last winter holiday, my family and I travelled to Australia.

国家名“Australia”前不需要加定冠词“the”，这是英语中常见的冠词使用规则。

× So we need to, uh, so we went to the airport early the two hours, but when I arrived the airport, I found, I forget, take my passport and I need to come back to my home to take the passport.

✓ So we needed to, uh, so we went to the airport two hours early, but when I arrived at the airport, I found I forgot to take my passport and I needed to go back home to get the passport.

“early the two hours”应改为“two hours early”，形容词顺序错误；“arrived the airport”应改为“arrived at the airport”，动词“arrive”后应接介词“at”；“forget, take my passport”应改为“forgot to take my passport”，动词时态和结构错误；“come back to my home”应改为“go back home”，介词使用不当。

× So we need to, uh, so we went to the airport early the two hours, but when I arrived the airport, I found, I forget, take my passport and I need to come back to my home to take the passport.

✓ So we needed to, uh, so we went to the airport two hours early, but when I arrived at the airport, I found I forgot to take my passport and I needed to go back home to get the passport.

句中时态应保持一致，描述过去的事情应使用过去时态，如“needed”，“went”，“arrived”，“found”，“forgot”，“needed”。

× Well, you know, as a college student, we have different UH course, so we need to make the plan or at least umm, to help to help me to remember some important item.

✓ Well, you know, as a college student, we have different UH courses, so we need to make a plan or at least, umm, to help me remember some important items.

“course”应使用复数形式“courses”，因为指多个课程；“the plan”应改为“不定冠词a plan”，因为这里指的是一个计划而非特指的计划；“item”应使用复数“items”，因为指多个重要物品。

× for example, today we have a important meeting with my UH tutor and I will make the.

✓ For example, today we have an important meeting with my UH tutor and I will make the plan.

“a important”应改为“an important”，因为“important”以元音音素开头，冠词应使用“an”。句子末尾不完整，应补充完整内容。

× And nowadays I, I would use the use my phone to to do this because in the phone we have, uh, have a many app to help help me to do this and it's very convenient and to help.

✓ And nowadays, I would use my phone to do this because on the phone we have many apps to help me do this and it's very convenient.

“in the phone”应改为“on the phone”，表示在手机上；“a many app”应改为“many apps”，去掉冠词“a”并使用复数形式；重复词“use the use”，“to to”，“help help”应删除多余部分。