记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答缺乏完整的句子结构，表达不够清晰，且内容较为混乱。建议在回答时先给出明确的主题句，然后用具体的细节支持，避免语法错误和重复。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, once my mom asked me to buy ingredients for cooking, but I forgot everything at the supermarket and had to return home without anything.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，导致表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并提供具体细节。

範例: Yes, I have. When I was in senior high school, I forgot to finish a complex homework assignment, and the next day my teacher was very disappointed.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达上的错误，且内容重复。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复，并用具体例子支持观点。

範例: In daily life, I need to remember simple but important things, such as taking my door keys when I go out, because I often forget them.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议先说明方法，再用具体例子说明，保持句子连贯。

範例: I usually write important things on a list. For instance, when I have many classes, I write them down so I can remember which class to attend at what time.

× Note I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ Note that I'm not good at memorizing things.

句子中缺少连词that，导致句子结构不完整。应加上that使句子更通顺。

× Like my mom told me to buy something to cook but when I was at the supermarket I forgot everything so when I went back home my mom blamed me very.

✓ Like my mom told me to buy something to cook, but when I was at the supermarket, I forgot everything, so when I went back home, my mom blamed me a lot.

句子缺少逗号分隔，且表达不完整，'blamed me very'不符合英语习惯，应改为'blamed me a lot'。

× Oh yes, when I was at my Senior High School, one day the homework is very complex and but I forgot to finish it and tomorrow my teacher.

✓ Oh yes, when I was at my Senior High School, one day the homework was very complex, but I forgot to finish it, and the next day my teacher reminded me.

时态不一致，描述过去事件应使用过去时；句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，需补充完整。

× I think it's crucial to remember the common things in our daily life.

✓ I think it's crucial to remember common things in our daily life.

'the common things'中'the'不必要，去掉更符合英语习惯。

× Like when I go outside, I always forget to take the keys of the door.

✓ Like when I go outside, I always forget to take the door keys.

'keys of the door'表达不自然，英语中常用'keys to the door'或'door keys'，此处用'door keys'更简洁。

× So it's really intentional to remember the things is very common.

✓ So it's really important to remember common things.

'intentional'用错，意为'故意的'，应使用'important'表示'重要的'；句子结构混乱，需简化。

× Old I will write them down the list like when I have heavy classes I will write them on my paper and so where is the time I can remember what class should I go to.

✓ Usually, I will write them down on a list. For example, when I have heavy classes, I write them on my paper so that I can remember which class I should go to at what time.

句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性和正确的表达方式，需重组句子使其通顺。