记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且用词不准确。建议加强语法基础，注意单复数和冠词的使用，同时使用更准确的词汇表达记忆技巧。

範例: Not really, my memory isn't very good, so I usually use tricks to help me remember things. For example, I like using notes or making lists to avoid forgetting important tasks.

建議: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议注意时态使用和句子结构，避免重复表达，同时使用连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: Yes, I once completely forgot a good friend's birthday. Although she didn't say anything at first, I could tell she was a bit upset. I felt really embarrassed and later made it up by treating her to dinner and buying her gifts. Now, I always set reminders on my phone just in case.

建議: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议练习句子结构，特别是疑问句和陈述句的区别，使用更准确的表达方式描述日常需要记住的事情。

範例: I have quite a few things to remember every day. For example, I need to know which classes I have and when they start. I also keep track of my homework deadlines to make sure I submit them on time.

建議: 回答中存在语法和表达不完整的问题，建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯，使用连接词清晰表达如何利用手机提醒重要事项。

範例: I usually set reminders on my phone if something is really important. For instance, if I have a meeting at work, I put it in my calendar with a notification to make sure I don't forget.

× Not really, my memory isn't that great so I usually need trick to help my remember things.

✓ Not really, my memory isn't that great so I usually need tricks to help me remember things.

这里的“trick”应该用复数形式“tricks”，因为通常需要多种方法来帮助记忆。

× Not really, my memory isn't that great so I usually need trick to help my remember things.

✓ Not really, my memory isn't that great so I usually need tricks to help me remember things.

“help my remember”中的“my”应改为宾格“me”，因为动词help后面接宾语。

× I like using else or making shirts nose to avoid forgetting.

✓ I like using notes or making short notes to avoid forgetting.

原句中“else”用法不当，应为“notes”；“shirts nose”应为“short notes”，是拼写错误。

× Yes, I went completely forgot a good friend's birthday.

✓ Yes, I completely forgot a good friend's birthday.

“went completely forgot”结构错误，应该直接用过去式“forgot”。

× She didn't say anything at first but I could tell she was a bit of upset.

✓ She didn't say anything at first but I could tell she was a bit upset.

“a bit of upset”中“upset”应为形容词，前面不需要“of”。

× I would feel really embarrassed and later made it all by treating her to dinner and buying her gifts.

✓ I felt really embarrassed and later made it up by treating her to dinner and buying her gifts.

“would feel”时态不合适，应为过去时“felt”；“made it all”应为“made it up”，表示弥补。

× Now I always set reminders in my phone just in case.

✓ Now I always set reminders on my phone just in case.

这里应使用介词“on”而非“in”，因为提醒是设置在手机的界面上。

× I need to know what classes I have and when they start and also can you check track of my homework days.

✓ I need to know what classes I have and when they start and also keep track of my homework deadlines.

“can you check track”结构不正确，应为“keep track”；“homework days”表达不准确，应为“homework deadlines”。

× I usually send some reminders on my phone if something is really important, like a meeting at work with someone who's I'll put it in my calendar with a notification.

✓ I usually send some reminders on my phone if something is really important, like a meeting at work with someone; I'll put it in my calendar with a notification.

“who's I'll”结构错误，应拆分为两个句子，避免混淆。