记忆— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
I guess I'm good at memorizing things. That's why I chose my major. My major is uh, which is veterinary sciences. Umm, the basic of science is I think memorize things and after that it's using.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
I. I'm good at memorizing it, but I'm a little hectic person so. I often forgot.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
For me, it is important to remember my schedule and my daily life. As an undergraduate student, it is really crucial to manage my schedule. Since every day is a busy day, it is important to manage.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
I get help from alarm application in my phone. If it's really really important or crucial schedule, I set an alarm. I'm two to three alarms and.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分數: 65.0建議: 답변이 다소 불명확하고 중복되는 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 더 명확하고 간결하게 구성하며, 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유를 명확히 제시하는 연습이 필요합니다.
範例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things, which is why I chose veterinary sciences as my major. In this field, memorizing scientific facts is essential before applying them in practice.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分數: 50.0建議: 문장이 불완전하고 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 이유를 명확히 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.
範例: Although I am generally good at memorizing, I sometimes forget important things because I tend to be a bit hectic.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分數: 70.0建議: 답변이 반복적이고 구체적인 예시가 부족합니다. 중복을 줄이고, 구체적인 상황이나 이유를 추가하여 답변을 풍부하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.
範例: I need to remember my daily schedule carefully because, as an undergraduate student, I have many classes and assignments to manage every day.
How do you remember important things?
分數: 60.0建議: 문장이 불완전하고 어색한 부분이 있습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 구체적인 방법과 이유를 명확히 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.
範例: I use the alarm application on my phone to remember important tasks. For very crucial events, I set two or three alarms to make sure I don't forget.
文法
× I often forgot.
✓ I often forget.
'Forgot' is the past tense of 'forget', but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used instead. 반복적인 행동을 나타낼 때는 과거형이 아닌 현재형을 사용해야 합니다.
× I get help from alarm application in my phone.
✓ I get help from the alarm application on my phone.
The correct preposition for indicating something on a device is 'on', and 'the' is needed before 'alarm application' to specify it. 기기 위에 있는 것을 나타낼 때는 'on'을 사용하며, 특정한 것을 지칭할 때는 정관사 'the'가 필요합니다.
× I'm two to three alarms and.
✓ I set two to three alarms.
The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper verb structure. The corrected sentence clearly states the action. 원래 문장은 불완전하며 동사 구조가 부족합니다. 수정된 문장은 동작을 명확히 표현합니다.
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