记忆— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially vocabulary in English. Or sometimes it's someone's name. For example, I met my friend yesterday and I couldn't remember his name. I was like shocked.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Yes I have. I have forgotten that I were having exams the next day and slept and I failed the exam.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
I need to remember to have my breakfast and maybe bring my charger to my school 'cause my phone dies really fast. Yes.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
I don't know exactly how do I remember important things. I just remember them like I wrote it down in my brain and then tomorrow I still knowing that I have to do something important. Yeah.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分數: 70.0建議: Та илүү байгалийн, үр дүнтэй хариулт өгөх хэрэгтэй. Хариулт тань заримдаа давтагдсан, зарим өгүүлбэрүүд нь холбогдолгүй байна. Илүү тодорхой, логик холбоотой, богино бөгөөд шуурхай хариулт өгнө үү.
範例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially English vocabulary and people's names. For instance, I met a friend yesterday but couldn't remember his name, which surprised me.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分數: 65.0建議: Хариулт тань хэл зүйн алдаатай, мөн илүү тодорхой, логик холбоотой байх хэрэгтэй. Таны өгүүлбэрүүдийг зөв бүтэцтэй, богино бөгөөд үр дүнтэй болгоорой.
範例: Yes, I once forgot that I had an exam the next day. I went to sleep without preparing and unfortunately, I failed the exam.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分數: 75.0建議: Хариулт тань илүү байгалийн, үр дүнтэй, тодорхой байх хэрэгтэй. Холбогч үг ашиглан өгүүлбэрүүдийг холбоотой болгоорой.
範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to have breakfast and also to bring my phone charger to school because my phone battery runs out quickly.
How do you remember important things?
分數: 60.0建議: Хариулт тань хэл зүйн алдаатай, тодорхой бус байна. Илүү тодорхой, логик холбоотой, зөв бүтэцтэй хариулт өгнө үү.
範例: I usually remember important things by repeating them in my mind, as if I wrote them down. This helps me recall them the next day.
文法
× Yes I have. I have forgotten that I were having exams the next day and slept and I failed the exam.
✓ Yes I have. I had forgotten that I was having exams the next day and slept and I failed the exam.
The sentence incorrectly uses 'were' instead of 'was' for the past tense singular subject 'I'. The correct past tense form is 'was'. Also, 'had forgotten' is more appropriate to indicate the action happened before the exams. Use past perfect 'had forgotten' to show the sequence of events clearly.
× I don't know exactly how do I remember important things.
✓ I don't know exactly how I remember important things.
In indirect questions, the word order should be subject + verb, not auxiliary verb + subject. 'How do I remember' is direct question order, but in this sentence, it should be 'how I remember' to be grammatically correct.
× I just remember them like I wrote it down in my brain and then tomorrow I still knowing that I have to do something important.
✓ I just remember them like I wrote it down in my brain and then tomorrow I still know that I have to do something important.
The phrase 'I still knowing' is incorrect because 'knowing' is a present participle and cannot be used as the main verb here. The correct form is 'I still know' in the present tense to match the meaning.
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