记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ja natural English er against. Apni 'I don't good at' er bodole 'I am not good at' bolte paren. Apnar answer e filler words (uh, umm) beshi, ja avoid kora uchit. Apni sentence gulo ke shothik vabe structure korben, ebong linking words use korben jate answer ta logical hoy. Apnar example gulo specific, kintu aro clear korte paren.

範例: Actually, I am not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget many details. For example, I often forget assignment submission dates or class schedules. Therefore, I always keep notes and set reminders on my phone to help me remember important tasks.

建議: Apnar answer e grammar error ache, jemon 'to forgotten' er bodole 'of forgetting' hobe. Apni sentence gulo ke shothik vabe structure korben, ebong linking words use korben. Apnar feelings express korte paren jate answer ta aro natural hoy. Example ta specific, kintu aro clear korte paren.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. Once, I forgot my best friend's birthday, and since we are very close, it made him very sad. I apologized sincerely, and this experience has become a memorable lesson for me.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'I need to suppose' er bodole 'I need to remember' hobe. Apni filler words komaben. Apnar sentence gulo ke shothik vabe structure korben, linking words use korben jate answer ta logical hoy. Apni aro specific details dite paren.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedules, assignment submission dates, and project deadlines. These are very important because as a student, I have many responsibilities, and keeping track of these helps me stay organized.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'for Don't forgotten' er bodole 'to not forget' hobe. Apni sentence gulo ke shothik vabe structure korben, linking words use korben. Apni aro specific details dite paren jemon kon type reminders use koren. Filler words komaben.

範例: To avoid forgetting important things, I set reminders and alarms on my phone. Additionally, I keep notes on my smartphone, which helps me a lot since I tend to forget things easily. These methods are very effective supports for me.

× Actually, I don't good at memorising things.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorising things.

The phrase 'don't good' is incorrect because 'do' is an auxiliary verb used with base verbs, but 'good' is an adjective. The correct form is 'I'm not good' using the verb 'to be' with the adjective 'good'.

× That's why it uh, make me to feel uh, disappointed in my life,

✓ That's why it makes me feel disappointed in my life,

The subject 'it' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make'. Also, 'make me to feel' is incorrect; the correct form is 'makes me feel' without 'to'.

× such as I forget the uh, assignment submission dates or my classes, uh, For this reason, I keep it up in my note and take reminders in my phone.

✓ such as forgetting assignment submission dates or my classes. For this reason, I keep them in my notes and set reminders on my phone.

The phrase 'keep it up in my note' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in my notes'. Also, 'take reminders in my phone' should be 'set reminders on my phone'. Additionally, 'I forget' should be 'forgetting' to fit the 'such as' example structure.

× Yes, I have this type of experience to forgotten something important.

✓ Yes, I have had this type of experience of forgetting something important.

The phrase 'to forgotten' is incorrect; 'forgotten' is a past participle and should not follow 'to'. The correct form is 'of forgetting' or 'experience of forgetting'. Also, 'have' should be 'have had' to indicate past experience.

× We are very close and my forwarding made him to feel very sad and I was very apologize for this reason.

✓ We are very close and my forgetting made him feel very sad and I was very sorry for this reason.

'My forwarding' is incorrect; it should be 'my forgetting'. Also, 'made him to feel' should be 'made him feel' without 'to'. 'I was very apologize' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I was very sorry'.

× It will be make memorable for my life.

✓ It will be memorable in my life.

The phrase 'will be make' is incorrect; 'will be' should be followed by an adjective or noun, not a verb. The correct form is 'will be memorable'. Also, 'for my life' is better expressed as 'in my life'.

× In my daily life, I need to suppose uh, my class schedules, uh, my assignment submission dates and my class project dates because this is very important for a student because I student have different type of responsibilities that uh that is one of them.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedules, assignment submission dates, and class project dates because these are very important for a student since students have different types of responsibilities, and this is one of them.

'I need to suppose' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remember'. Also, 'I student have' should be 'students have' for subject-verb agreement and plural form. 'Different type' should be 'different types'.

× In my daily life for Don't forgotten the important things, I keep reminders and alarms in my phone and also keep relying notes on my smartphone.

✓ In my daily life, to not forget important things, I keep reminders and alarms on my phone and also keep relying notes on my smartphone.

'For Don't forgotten' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to not forget'. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' as the correct preposition for devices.

× It's helped me a lot because I forget so much.

✓ It has helped me a lot because I forget so much.

'It's helped' is incorrect; the correct present perfect form is 'It has helped'.

× It is the one of the best support for me.

✓ It is one of the best supports for me.

The phrase 'the one of the best' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the best'. Also, 'support' should be plural 'supports' to match 'one of the best'.