记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va noaniq ifodalar mavjud. Ingliz tilida tabiiy va aniq gapirish uchun, fikrlaringizni qisqa va lo'nda ifodalashga harakat qiling. Masalan, "I am good at memorizing because I use my creativity and imagination to remember important things." kabi oddiy va tushunarli gaplar tuzing.

範例: I am good at memorizing because I use my creativity and imagination to remember important things. For example, I imagine vivid pictures related to the information, which helps me recall it easily.

建議: Javobingizda takroriy so'zlar va to'liq bo'lmagan gaplar bor. Ingliz tilida aniq va to'liq gapirishga e'tibor bering. Masalan, "Yes, I once forgot my keys on the table after a busy day." kabi qisqa va aniq gap tuzing.

範例: Yes, I once forgot my keys on the table after a busy day. It was inconvenient because I couldn't leave the house without them.

建議: Javobingizda gap tuzilishi va so'z tanlashda xatolar bor. Ingliz tilida to'g'ri gap tuzish uchun, mavzuni aniq ifodalashga harakat qiling. Masalan, "I need to remember my daily routines, stay disciplined, and plan where I am going." kabi oddiy va aniq gaplar tuzing.

範例: I need to remember my daily routines, stay disciplined, and plan where I am going. This helps me manage my time effectively.

建議: Javobingizda takroriy so'zlar va grammatik xatolar mavjud. Ingliz tilida fikrlarni aniq va mantiqiy tarzda ifodalash uchun, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning va takroriy so'zlardan qoching. Masalan, "I remember important things by imagining their colors, shapes, and sizes because it helps me recall them better." kabi gaplar tuzing.

範例: I remember important things by imagining their colors, shapes, and sizes because it helps me recall them better. Using imagination makes memorizing easier for me.

× From my point of view, I can say that I'm really good at memorizing things because my brain is a really stronger and creativity and my brain has the intelligence of memorizing things.

✓ From my point of view, I can say that I'm really good at memorizing things because my brain is really strong and creative, and my brain has the intelligence to memorize things.

The adjective 'stronger' is a comparative form and requires a comparison object, but here it is used incorrectly without comparison. 'Creativity' is a noun, but an adjective 'creative' is needed to describe the brain. Also, 'has the intelligence of memorizing things' is awkward; 'has the intelligence to memorize things' is correct.

× Yes, when when we we were having whole day I forgot my keys.

✓ Yes, when we were having the whole day, I forgot my keys.

The phrase 'were having whole day' is incorrect; it should be 'were having the whole day' to specify the time period. Also, repeated words 'when when' and 'we we' are errors and should be removed.

× I forgot my keys on on the table and.

✓ I forgot my keys on the table.

Repeated word 'on on' is incorrect and should be corrected to a single 'on'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and', which should be removed for completeness.

× In my opinion, I should remember my daily routines and my discipline and where am I going to do because it's really important, I think.

✓ In my opinion, I should remember my daily routines, my discipline, and where I am going because it's really important, I think.

The phrase 'where am I going to do' is incorrect in word order and usage. It should be 'where I am going'. Also, commas are needed to separate items in the list for clarity.

× I usually remember their colors and shapes and formats and their weights because it's really helps me to remember that important or necessary things, I think.

✓ I usually remember their colors, shapes, formats, and weights because it really helps me to remember those important or necessary things, I think.

The pronoun 'it's' should be 'it' because 'helps' is the verb and 'it' is the subject. Also, 'that important or necessary things' should be 'those important or necessary things' to agree in number. Commas are added for clarity in the list.