记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が長すぎて冗長になっており、文法的な誤りもあります。質問に直接答えた後、具体的な例を簡潔に述べるようにしましょう。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget my wallet or smartphone, which causes problems.

建議: 回答が少し不自然で、時制や語彙の使い方に改善の余地があります。より自然な表現と論理的なつながりを意識しましょう。

範例: Yes, I have. Recently, I forgot an appointment with my friend, but she reminded me by sending a message.

建議: 意味が不明瞭で、語彙の誤用があります。質問に対して直接的かつ明確に答え、具体的な内容を含めるようにしましょう。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments, so I use reminders on my smartphone to help me.

建議: 表現が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。正しい語彙を使い、論理的に説明することが必要です。

範例: I usually write important information on my phone. When a notification appears, it reminds me to do the task.

× No, I'm not, because I always forget my wallet and my smartphone and when when I was primary school students I left my keys and my mother got angry.

✓ No, I'm not, because I always forget my wallet and my smartphone, and when I was a primary school student, I left my keys and my mother got angry.

The phrase 'primary school students' should be singular 'primary school student' because it refers to the speaker themselves. Also, a missing article 'a' before 'primary school student' is needed. Additionally, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses properly.

× Yes, I have uh, recently I forgot the promise with my friend and she sent message to me. Then I realize I forgot something.

✓ Yes, I have. Uh, recently I forgot a promise with my friend and she sent a message to me. Then I realized I forgot something.

The verb 'realize' should be in past tense 'realized' to match the past context. Also, 'promise' and 'message' need the article 'a' before them. The sentence 'Yes, I have uh' is better separated with a period for clarity.

× Yes, I have uh, recently I forgot the promise with my friend and she sent message to me. Then I realize I forgot something.

✓ Yes, I have. Uh, recently I forgot a promise to my friend and she sent a message to me. Then I realized I forgot something.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'to' is the correct preposition to indicate the promise was made to the friend. Also, 'message' needs the article 'a' before it.

× I always Likud something on my smartphone screen. If it appears I can recognize I have something important.

✓ I always lock something on my smartphone screen. If it appears, I can recognize that I have something important.

The word 'Likud' is a misspelling of 'lock'. Also, a comma is needed after 'appears' to separate clauses. Adding 'that' improves clarity.

× I always lie down information on my phone if it appears I can realize I have something important.

✓ I always write down information on my phone. If it appears, I can realize I have something important.

The phrase 'lie down information' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write down information'. Also, a comma is needed after 'appears' to separate clauses.