记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“have good at memory things”应为“am good at memorising things”。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用正确的时态和结构表达。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when I was a child, I often went outside with my grandmother to play games and enjoy delicious food. She also used to buy many shoes for me.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复，并且具体说明忘记的事情。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once my mother asked me to close the window on a rainy day, but I forgot to do it, which caused some trouble.

建議: 回答中缺少连贯的连接词，语法和表达不够准确。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法正确性。

範例: I definitely need to remember my work schedule every day. As a music teacher, I have to keep track of each student's studio time, so I am very careful with my schedule.

建議: 表达不够自然，存在语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且说明具体方法。

範例: I usually write down important things in my agenda and note the time for each task to help me remember them.

× I have good at memory things.

✓ I am good at memorising things.

这里's 'have good at memory things'结构不正确，应该用形容词短语 'good at memorising things' 来表达擅长记忆。'memory things' 也不符合英语表达习惯，应改为动名词形式。

× When I was child I always with my grandmother go outside to play game and eating good food.

✓ When I was a child, I always went outside with my grandmother to play games and eat good food.

过去时态错误，'was child'缺少冠词'a'，'go'应改为过去式'went'，'eating'应改为动词原形'eat'，'play game'应为复数'play games'。

× My grandmother always buy a lot of shoes for me.

✓ My grandmother always buys a lot of shoes for me.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，'buy'应改为'buys'。

× Yes, I have forgot something important that's really terrible for me such like my mom needed me help to close the window when is the raining day, but I always forgot.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important that's really terrible for me, such as when my mom needed me to help close the window on a rainy day, but I always forgot.

'have forgot'应为现在完成时的过去分词'have forgotten'，'such like'应为'such as'，'needed me help'应为'needed me to help'，'when is the raining day'应为'on a rainy day'。

× I definitely need remember my job in daily life.

✓ I definitely need to remember my job in daily life.

动词need后接动词时应加不定式to，'need remember'应改为'need to remember'。

× I am the teacher, music teacher.

✓ I am a teacher, a music teacher.

职业前应使用不定冠词'a'，'the teacher'暗示特指，通常不用于自我介绍。

× I need remember each student studio time in my schedule, so I really carefully my schedule.

✓ I need to remember each student's studio time in my schedule, so I am really careful with my schedule.

'need remember'应为'need to remember'，'each student studio time'应为'each student's studio time'表示所有格，'carefully'是副词，需改为形容词'careful'，并加介词'with'。

× I usually write down important things in my agenda paper and I will cite each things and each time.

✓ I usually write down important things in my agenda and I will note each thing and each time.

'agenda paper'表达不自然，通常说'agenda'即可，'cite'用法错误，应为'note'或'record'，'each things'应为'singular each thing'。