记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點冗長且有語法錯誤，例如 "I'll forgot" 應為 "I forget"。建議回答時先直接回答問題，然後用一兩句話補充原因，並注意動詞時態和語法正確。

範例: No, I'm not good at memorising things because I tend to forget information quickly. Therefore, I usually write important details down to help me remember.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和不完整的句子，且內容有些混亂。建議回答時保持句子完整，使用連接詞使敘述更流暢，並注意時態一致。

範例: Yes, when I was in senior high school, I often forgot to bring my assignments because I would leave them on my desk after finishing my homework at night. As a result, I had to rush back home sometimes to get them.

建議: 回答內容具體且有例子，但句子結構可以更自然，並使用連接詞使語意更連貫。注意 "go to gym" 應為 "go to the gym"。

範例: I need to remember many things in my daily life. For example, I prepare my lunch and dinner in advance so I have food ready for the next day. Also, I try to go to the gym regularly to stay healthy, but sometimes I forget when I'm too busy.

建議: 回答中有重複詞語和語法錯誤，且最後一句話表達不清。建議簡潔明確地說明方法，並使用正確的語法。

範例: Usually, I take notes in a special notebook. Every morning before going to work, I check my notes to remind myself of important tasks so I don't forget them.

× No, I'm bad at memorizing things because every time when people tell me something, I'll forgot immediately.

✓ No, I'm bad at memorizing things because every time when people tell me something, I forget immediately.

The verb 'forgot' is the past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action in the present, so the simple present tense 'forget' should be used instead.

× Yes, back in the day when I was in Senior High School, I usually forget to bring my assignment because at night I when I finish the the homework, I just put it on desk and I forgot to put it in my bag.

✓ Yes, back in the day when I was in Senior High School, I usually forgot to bring my assignment because at night when I finished the homework, I just put it on the desk and forgot to put it in my bag.

The sentence refers to past habitual actions, so the past tense 'forgot' and 'finished' should be used. Also, 'the desk' needs the definite article 'the'.

× So the next day I when I get up there, I just rush to school and.

✓ So the next day when I got up, I just rushed to school.

The phrase 'get up there' is incorrect; 'got up' is the correct past tense for the action of waking up. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× I need to remember a lot of things. For example, I need to prepare my lunch and dinner so that I can have something to eat in the next day.

✓ I need to remember a lot of things. For example, I need to prepare my lunch and dinner so that I can have something to eat the next day.

The phrase 'in the next day' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'the next day' without 'in'.

× And also I need to go to gym to make my body healthy.

✓ And also I need to go to the gym to keep my body healthy.

The phrase 'go to gym' requires the definite article 'the' before 'gym'. Also, 'make my body healthy' is better expressed as 'keep my body healthy'.

× So usually when I'm too busy, I'll easily forget that I need to go workout.

✓ So usually when I'm too busy, I easily forget that I need to go work out.

The phrase 'go workout' is incorrect; it should be 'go work out' as 'work out' is a phrasal verb meaning to exercise.

× Usually I'll take a note.

✓ Usually I'll take notes.

The phrase 'take a note' is less common; 'take notes' is the standard expression for writing down important information.

× I have a book for writing things that are important to for me.

✓ I have a book for writing things that are important to me.

The phrase 'important to for me' contains an extra preposition 'for' which is incorrect; it should be 'important to me'.

× So every every morning when I'm going, before I go to work, I'll check my notes to make sure that there are some important things for me to do so that I won't remember those things.

✓ So every morning before I go to work, I'll check my notes to make sure that there are some important things for me to do so that I won't forget those things.

The phrase 'when I'm going' is unnecessary and awkward here. Also, 'won't remember' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'won't forget' to express the intended meaning.