记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你嘅答案有啲重複同埋唔夠流暢，例如「trivial trivial things」同「I think I believe」呢啲表達可以簡化同埋更自然。建議你用更簡潔嘅句子，避免重複，並且用連接詞令句子更流暢。

範例: I'm not very good at memorizing trivial things, so I rely on my phone's To Do List. However, I can remember important information like assignment deadlines quite well.

建議: 你嘅答案有啲唔清晰同埋語法錯誤，例如「Maybe I still got」同「cause an influence」唔係自然嘅英文表達。建議你用更準確嘅詞語同埋句子結構，並且避免模糊嘅表達。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten things before, but not often. Usually, I forget small items like an umbrella, but never anything very important that would cause problems.

建議: 你嘅答案有好多重複同埋語法錯誤，例如「because because I I don't have a a hard copy」同「I forgot that I've dated someone」唔自然。建議你練習流暢嘅句子，避免重複，並且用正確嘅時態同詞語。

範例: I usually need to remember my daily schedule and routines because I don't carry a paper copy. Sometimes, I even forget appointments with friends after work.

建議: 你嘅答案表達清晰，但有啲重複，例如「remind me」用得太多。建議你用不同嘅詞語同連接詞令答案更自然同多樣化。

範例: As I mentioned, I use my phone's To Do List and a reminder app to keep track of my daily schedule. Additionally, I set alarms to make sure I don't miss important tasks.

× Maybe I still got.

✓ Maybe I still have got.

'Got' is the past tense of 'get', but here the present perfect form 'have got' is needed to express possession or experience up to now. 建議使用現在完成式 'have got' 來表達持續的狀態或經驗。

× I usually forgot to bring something when I go out, like umbrella or stuff, but not something crucial or that would cause an influence.

✓ I usually forget to bring something when I go out, like an umbrella or stuff, but not something crucial or that would cause an influence.

The adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used instead of the past tense 'forgot'. 此處應使用現在式 'forget' 來表達習慣性動作。

× I usually forgot to bring something when I go out, like umbrella or stuff, but not something crucial or that would cause an influence.

✓ I usually forget to bring something when I go out, like an umbrella or stuff, but not something crucial or that would cause an influence.

The noun 'umbrella' is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'an'. 'Umbrella' 前面應加不定冠詞 'an'。

× So sometimes I forgot that I I've dated someone after work or the at the exact time or place.

✓ So sometimes I forget that I've dated someone after work or at the exact time or place.

Again, 'sometimes' indicates habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is appropriate instead of past tense 'forgot'. 此處應使用現在式 'forget' 來表達偶爾發生的習慣性動作。

× So sometimes I forgot that I I've dated someone after work or the at the exact time or place.

✓ So sometimes I forget that I've dated someone after work or at the exact time or place.

The phrase 'the at the exact time' contains an unnecessary 'the' before 'at'. 應刪除多餘的定冠詞 'the'。