记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I think I am good at memorizing things. For important matters, I always set reminders and notifications on my phone to make sure I don't forget them.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，内容重复且不连贯，建议使用正确的时态，避免重复，并且表达清晰具体。

範例: Yes, definitely. Last year, I forgot my best friend's birthday party. I felt very embarrassed and apologized sincerely to him.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，建议使用完整句子并具体说明需要记住的事项，避免模糊表达。

範例: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as deadlines for my school assignments and important items like my children's ID cards.

建議: 回答中存在用词错误和表达不准确的问题，建议使用正确的词汇和句式，表达清晰具体。

範例: For important things, I set reminders and notifications on my phone, and I also write them down on paper to keep track.

× Yes, uh, maybe I'm a person who is good at memorizing something, but for something important I'm sure don't forget it.

✓ Yes, uh, maybe I'm a person who is good at memorizing things, but for something important I'm sure I don't forget it.

这里的'memorizing something'应改为'memorizing things'，因为表示一般能力时用复数形式。

× I will set reminder and notification for it so that it be more perfect.

✓ I will set reminders and notifications for it so that it is more perfect.

主语是复数'reminders and notifications'，谓语动词应使用复数形式'set'，且后面'it be'应改为'it is'，保持主谓一致。

× And definitely yes, last year I forget an important thing, I forget my favorite, I forget my best friend's birthday party.

✓ And definitely yes, last year I forgot an important thing, I forgot my favorite, I forgot my best friend's birthday party.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式'forgot'，而不是现在式'forget'。

× And after that I feel so embarrassed and I apologize him sincerely and he forgets me.

✓ And after that I felt so embarrassed and I apologized to him sincerely, but he forgot me.

动词时态应为过去式，'apologize'后应加介词'to'，'he forgets me'应为过去式'he forgot me'。

× I have a lot of things have to to remember.

✓ I have a lot of things to remember.

句子中重复使用'have to'，应简化为'to remember'，且保持复数形式'things'。

× For example I had to remember the deadline of our study works and also have to remember something necessary for example kids ID card and some.

✓ For example, I have to remember the deadline of our study work and also have to remember some necessary things, for example kids' ID cards and so on.

描述日常需要记住的事情，应使用现在时'have to'，'study works'应为不可数名词'study work'，'kids ID card'应为复数所有格'kids' ID cards'。

× For something important, I will cite a remember and notification on my phone and I will also keep track of them on the paper.

✓ For something important, I will set a reminder and notification on my phone and I will also keep track of them on paper.

'cite a remember'用词错误，应为'set a reminder'，'on the paper'改为'on paper'更自然。