记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper verb forms and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I am not very good at memorising things. Therefore, I use the reminder app on my phone to note down important events and meetings. It helps me by setting alarms or special ringtones, which ensure I don't forget them.

建議: Your answer is quite good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and making the sentences more fluent. Use linking words like 'because' and 'since' effectively and avoid ending with phrases like 'So that's it'.

範例: Yes, I once missed a deadline for a school project because I was overwhelmed with multiple tasks and did not manage my time well. Since then, I have started using reminders and planners to stay organised and prevent similar mistakes.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains unnecessary fillers. Try to respond directly with clear sentences and avoid vague phrases like 'like that' or 'you know'. Also, keep your answer concise and structured.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my office work, including assignments, meetings, and webinars. These are important tasks that require my attention every day.

建議: Improve your grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, try to end your answer naturally without incomplete phrases.

範例: I usually remember important things by using the reminder app on my phone. It helps me keep track of meetings, office webinars, and assignments effectively.

× No I'm not a good memorizer that's why I keep on remind any particular event or any meeting in my phone in reminding app.

✓ No, I'm not a good memorizer; that's why I keep on reminding any particular event or any meeting in my phone's reminder app.

The verb 'remind' should be in the '-ing' form 'reminding' after 'keep on' to indicate continuous action. Also, 'reminding app' should be 'reminder app' as the correct noun form.

× So it helped me to reminding through alarm and or any special ringtone so it's make help.

✓ So it helps me by reminding through an alarm or any special ringtone, so it is helpful.

The phrase 'helped me to reminding' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me by reminding' to use the gerund correctly after 'helps me'. Also, 'it's make help' is incorrect; it should be 'it is helpful'.

× I was overwhelmed, overwhelmed with a multiple task and didn't manage my time well.

✓ I was overwhelmed, overwhelmed with multiple tasks and didn't manage my time well.

The phrase 'a multiple task' is incorrect because 'multiple' implies more than one, so the noun should be plural 'tasks' without the article 'a'.

× I often to remember importing things to using the reminder app in my phone that make me really helpful for reminding such a important matters like of my meetings, my office webinars or any other assignments.

✓ I often remember important things by using the reminder app on my phone, which is really helpful for reminding me of important matters like my meetings, office webinars, or other assignments.

The phrase 'I often to remember importing things to using' is incorrect; it should be 'I often remember important things by using'. Also, 'such a important matters' should be 'important matters' without 'a' because 'matters' is plural.