记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“forgot my food in the bridge”应为“forgot my food on the bridge”。建议注意时态和介词的正确使用，同时避免重复表达“depressed”和“annoying”，可以用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Honestly, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I once forgot my lunch on the bridge, which was quite frustrating. This made me feel really annoyed.

建議: 回答中时态使用不当，如“I get the 0 score”应为“I got a zero score”。表达不够连贯，且“left a deep impression for my teacher”表达不准确，建议使用更自然的表达并注意语法。

範例: Yes, when I was in senior high school, I once forgot to attend an exam and got a zero score. This experience made me feel very upset, and it also left a strong impression on my teacher.

建議: 回答内容较为具体，但句子结构稍显重复，且“the daily work”表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks. For example, when my employer assigns me tasks related to suppliers, I have to research them carefully and remember their specific requirements.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“take note of it”应为“take notes”，且“ask for my employer's help”表达不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

範例: Well, since I'm not good at remembering important things, I always take notes. For instance, if I encounter problems at work, I write them down and then ask my employer for help.

× I always forgot my food in the bridge so it will be bad.

✓ I always forget my food on the bridge so it will be bad.

这里描述的是经常发生的事情，应该用一般现在时forget，而不是过去时forgot。

× I always forgot my food in the bridge so it will be bad.

✓ I always forget my food on the bridge so it will be bad.

介词应使用on表示在桥上，而不是in。

× I was depressed about it.

✓ I was depressed about it.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× I felt really annoying.

✓ I felt really annoyed.

felt后应接形容词，annoyed表示感到烦恼，annoying表示令人烦恼，故应改为annoyed。

× Yes I do, when I was a Senior High School student I forgot my exam so I get the 0 score in my school.

✓ Yes I did, when I was a Senior High School student I forgot my exam so I got a 0 score in my school.

描述过去发生的事情，助动词do应改为did，动词get应改为过去式got。

× I get the 0 score in my school.

✓ I got a 0 score in my school.

数字前应使用不定冠词a，而不是定冠词the。

× I have I left a deep impression for my teacher.

✓ I left a deep impression on my teacher.

句子结构混乱，应去掉多余的have，介词应为on表示对某人留下印象。

× I have I left a deep impression for my teacher.

✓ I left a deep impression on my teacher.

表达“给某人留下印象”应使用介词on，而不是for。

× The important thing that I need to remember in my daily life is the daily work.

✓ The important thing that I need to remember in my daily life is daily work.

daily work是不可数名词，不需要加定冠词the。

× when my employer gave me some task about suppliers, I needed to search for them and remember their specific requirements.

✓ when my employer gave me some tasks about suppliers, I needed to search for them and remember their specific requirements.

task应为复数tasks，因为some表示复数。

× when my employer gave me some task about suppliers, I needed to search for them and remember their specific requirements.

✓ when my employer gave me some tasks about suppliers, I needed to search for them and remember their specific requirements.

some后面应接复数名词tasks。

× Well, I think I'm not good at remembering important things, so I always take note of it.

✓ Well, I think I'm not good at remembering important things, so I always take notes of them.

take notes是固定搭配，notes应为复数，且it应改为them指代复数的important things。

× When I have some problems in my work, I would write it down and ask for my employer's help.

✓ When I have some problems in my work, I would write them down and ask for my employer's help.

problems为复数，代词应使用them而非it。