记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence clarity. For example, avoid repeating phrases like "linking the linking it". Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. Keep your answer concise and directly address the question.

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I prefer to understand concepts deeply. However, when I need to memorise, I link new information to things I already know, which helps me remember better.

建議: Your answer is clear and includes a specific example, which is good. To improve, use linking words like "for instance" or "because" to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid repeating similar phrases and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, recently I missed a dentist appointment because I forgot to set my alarm. This usually happens when my mind is occupied with other thoughts.

建議: Your answer covers the topic but could be more structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words like "for example" or "however". Avoid vague phrases like "lots of stuff" and be more precise.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks such as praying, attending school, and completing homework. However, it can be challenging when I have many other activities, so I use reminders to help me stay organized.

建議: Good answer with clear explanation. To improve, you could add linking words and a bit more detail to make it more natural and engaging. For example, explain why this method is effective for you.

範例: I usually use the Reminders app on my phone to remember important tasks. It sends me notifications at the right time, which helps me stay on track and not forget anything important.

× However, when I do tend to memorize things, I memorize it by linking the linking it to other things rather than photographic.

✓ However, when I do tend to memorize things, I memorize them by linking them to other things rather than photographically.

The sentence contains repetition ('linking the linking it') and incorrect use of 'photographic' as an adjective instead of the adverb 'photographically'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'things'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× However, when I do tend to memorize things, I memorize it by linking the linking it to other things rather than photographic.

✓ However, when I do tend to memorize things, I memorize them by linking them to other things rather than photographically.

The pronoun 'it' is used incorrectly to refer to 'things', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them' to maintain singular/plural agreement.

× However, when I do tend to memorize things, I memorize it by linking the linking it to other things rather than photographic.

✓ However, when I do tend to memorize things, I memorize them by linking them to other things rather than photographically.

The phrase 'linking the linking it' is redundant and disrupts sentence flow. Removing the repetition corrects the sentence structure.

× I have forgotten important things before multiple times.

✓ I have forgotten important things multiple times before.

The adverbial phrase 'multiple times' is better placed before 'before' for natural English word order.

× For example, the other day I had a very important dentist appointment, I had to wake up early for it, and I completely forgot to set up my alarm, which is an example of a time that I forgot something.

✓ For example, the other day I had a very important dentist appointment; I had to wake up early for it, and I completely forgot to set my alarm, which is an example of a time when I forgot something.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence. Using a semicolon or splitting into two sentences improves clarity. Also, 'set up my alarm' is better as 'set my alarm' in this context, and 'a time that' should be 'a time when' for correct relative clause usage.

× I tend to forget things more often when I'm thinking about other things.

✓ I tend to forget things more often when I'm thinking of other things.

The preposition 'thinking about' is acceptable, but 'thinking of' is more commonly used when referring to recalling or remembering, which fits the context better.

× One of the things I need to remember in my daily life is praying and school, work and homework.

✓ One of the things I need to remember in my daily life is praying and my schoolwork and homework.

'School, work and homework' is awkward; combining 'schoolwork and homework' as uncountable nouns is clearer. Also, adding 'my' clarifies possession.

× Sometimes it's a little bit of a struggle when I have other things going on and they occupy my day with lots of stuff, but there are some things that can help me remember these things.

✓ Sometimes it's a little bit of a struggle when I have other things going on that occupy my day with lots of stuff, but there are some things that can help me remember these things.

Using 'and' to connect 'other things going on' and 'they occupy my day' creates a run-on. Replacing 'and' with 'that' forms a relative clause, improving sentence structure.

× Sometimes I put the important tasks that I need to do throughout my day on my Reminders app, which gives me a notification of the time that I set up in the app earlier when I'm supposed to do the task.

✓ Sometimes I put the important tasks that I need to do throughout my day into my Reminders app, which gives me a notification at the time that I set in the app earlier when I'm supposed to do the task.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect for placing tasks into an app; 'into' is appropriate. Also, 'notification of the time' should be 'notification at the time' for correct prepositional use. 'Set up' is better as 'set' here because 'set up' implies installation or configuration, while 'set' refers to scheduling.