记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e beshi redundant ar unclear kotha use korchen. Apnar uttor ke sohoje bujhte parbe, tai simple ar clear sentence use korun. Apni direct question er uttor din, tarpor kichu supporting details din, kintu unnecessary repetition avoid korun.

範例: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget important information. For example, my friends sometimes joke that I should check if I have memory problems, but I think it's just natural for me.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ar repetition ache. Apni clear ar shothik sentence structure use korun. Supporting example ta bhalo, kintu apni linking words use kore uttor ke aro logical banate paren.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once my father asked me to buy some ingredients from the grocery shop, but I completely forgot to buy them. This made me realize I need to be more careful.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu unclear ar incomplete sentence ache. Apni sentence gulo ke shothik bhabe complete korun ar clear vocabulary use korun. Apni linking words use kore uttor ke aro bhalo kore organize korte paren.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my tasks by dividing the day into three parts of eight hours each. I write my schedule in my notebook and cross out activities after completing them. This method helps me stay organized.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu word choice ar repetition er problem ache. Apni simple ar relevant vocabulary use korun. Sentence gulo ke shothik bhabe structure korun ar avoid repetition. Linking words use kore uttor ke logical banan.

範例: I remember important things by writing notes, dates, and data in my personal notebook. I organize the information systematically, which helps me recall them easily.

× though my some friends tells me to tell me that I have, uh, I have to check, uh, whether I have dementia or, uh, it is a, it is just did by natural way, that's all.

✓ though some of my friends tell me that I have to check whether I have dementia or if it is just done naturally, that's all.

The verb 'tells' is incorrect because the subject 'friends' is plural, so the verb should be 'tell' to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'my some friends' is incorrect word order; it should be 'some of my friends'. Additionally, 'did by natural way' is incorrect; it should be 'done naturally'. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement and proper word order.

× Sometimes I have forget some important data or things.

✓ Sometimes I have forgotten some important data or things.

The phrase 'have forget' is incorrect because after 'have' (present perfect), the past participle form of the verb should be used. The correct past participle of 'forget' is 'forgotten'. So, 'have forgotten' is the correct form.

× I for totally forget about forget about the ingredients which I should purchase.

✓ I totally forgot about the ingredients which I should purchase.

The phrase 'for totally forget' is incorrect. The correct past tense form is 'forgot'. Also, the repetition of 'forget about' is unnecessary. The sentence should use simple past tense 'forgot' to describe a completed action in the past.

× I have to note it in, in my steak Peppers.

✓ I have to note it in my stack of papers.

The phrase 'steak Peppers' is incorrect and seems to be a mispronunciation or misspelling. The correct phrase is likely 'stack of papers'. Also, the preposition 'in' is correctly used here to indicate where the notes are written.

× I have to define, uh, divide the daily a routine and I routine by three parts, like 8 hours, 8 hours and 8 hours.

✓ I have to define and divide the daily routine into three parts, like 8 hours, 8 hours, and 8 hours.

The phrase 'divide the daily a routine and I routine' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'divide the daily routine'. Also, the preposition 'into' is needed to indicate division into parts. This correction clarifies the sentence structure and preposition usage.

× I have my personal notebook and in that notebook I write all the vital and program in any in more imminent factors or data which I need.

✓ I have my personal notebook and in that notebook I write all the vital and important factors or data which I need.

The phrase 'program in any in more imminent factors' is incorrect and unclear. It seems the intended meaning is 'important factors'. The pronoun usage is corrected by replacing unclear words with appropriate adjectives to clarify meaning.