记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I've always forgot people's what they what they look like”不符合英语表达习惯。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，同时避免重复和冗余。

範例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially people's names and faces. I often forget what people look like shortly after meeting them, which makes me feel quite embarrassed.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态一致，避免重复，并补充细节使内容更具体。

範例: Yes, I once forgot to submit my essay before the deadline. It caused me a lot of stress, and I had to explain the situation to my professor.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不准确，句子过长且缺乏连贯性。建议分句表达，使用连接词使内容更连贯，同时注意词汇的准确使用。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to feed my cat three times a day. Sometimes I wake up late, and she meows loudly all day, which annoys me. I feel sorry because she depends on me for her care.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并具体说明方法的效果。

範例: A really effective way for me to remember important things is to write a schedule the night before. This helps me stay organized and reminds me of my tasks, improving my daily life.

× I've always forgot people's what they what they look like after once we have met.

✓ I've always forgotten what people look like after we have met.

这里使用了过去式 'forgot'，但在完成时态中应使用过去分词 'forgotten'。正确的完成时态结构是 'have + 过去分词'。

× So I feel really embarrassing and terrible about it.

✓ So I feel really embarrassed and terrible about it.

'embarrassing' 是形容事物使人感到尴尬，而这里主语是 'I'，应使用形容词 'embarrassed' 来描述人的感受。

× Yes, I remember once I forgot a thing really important is to forgot to submit my essay on the deadline.

✓ Yes, I remember once I forgot a really important thing: I forgot to submit my essay by the deadline.

句中 'forgot' 用于过去时态，正确，但表达不清晰，需调整语序和标点。

× So it brings me a lot of stress and I was quite on trouble on that day and I have explained to my professor and.

✓ So it brought me a lot of stress and I was quite in trouble that day and I explained to my professor.

描述过去事件时，动词应使用过去时态，如 'brought' 和 'explained'。此外，'on trouble' 应为 'in trouble'。

× I was quite on trouble on that day

✓ I was quite in trouble that day

短语应为 'in trouble'，表示处于麻烦中，'on trouble' 是错误的介词搭配。

× I have explained to my professor and.

✓ I explained to my professor.

句子末尾多余 'and'，且时态应统一为过去时。

× In my daily life I have to remember to feed my cat in each day about three times

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember to feed my cat about three times each day

'in each day' 应改为 'each day' 或 'every day'，且位置调整更自然。

× she will meowing and annoy me for the whole day

✓ she will meow and annoy me the whole day

'will' 后应接动词原形，'meowing' 应改为 'meow'。

× and really it was really loud

✓ and it was really loud

句中 'really' 重复使用，去掉第一个 'really' 更简洁。

× because it been depends on me of her ease.

✓ because it depends on me for her ease.

'been depends' 结构错误，应为 'depends'；'depends on me of her ease' 应为 'depends on me for her ease'。

× A really effective way for me of remembering things is to write schedule everything I need to do the night before I doing this thing

✓ A really effective way for me to remember things is to write a schedule of everything I need to do the night before I do these things

'way for me of remembering' 应为 'way for me to remember'；'write schedule everything' 应为 'write a schedule of everything'；'I doing' 应为 'I do'。

× and it helps me a lot and makes me doing better for my SO social situation and it reminds me for important things.

✓ and it helps me a lot and makes me do better in my social situations and it reminds me of important things.

'makes me doing' 应为 'makes me do'；'for my SO social situation' 应为 'in my social situations'；'reminds me for' 应为 'reminds me of'。