记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

範例: I'm not very good at memorizing things generally, but I try to improve my memory when preparing for exams because I want to do my best.

建議: 回答表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, like my father's birthday once. I felt very ashamed because he means a lot to me.

建議: 回答中语法和表达混乱，建议简化句子，明确表达重点，并使用恰当的词汇。

範例: The most important things I need to remember daily are to exercise regularly and take my medicine for bronchial asthma.

建議: 回答较为完整，但句子较长且重复，建议简化表达，使用连贯的连接词使回答更自然。

範例: I find it hard to remember everything, so I usually take notes and set reminders on my phone at the start of the day to keep track of my tasks.

× I would definitely become better on memory things since I would like to do my best in the comic exam.

✓ I would definitely become better at memorizing things since I would like to do my best in the coming exam.

这里动词短语应使用动名词形式'memorizing'，而不是名词'memory'。此外，介词应为'at'，表示擅长某事。

× Yes for sure this.

✓ Yes, for sure.

该句结构不完整，'this'多余且使句子不通顺，应去掉。

× Ha, this definitely happened in every person's life that I forgot one of my father's birthday.

✓ Ha, this definitely happens in everyone's life that sometimes they forget their father's birthday.

时态应与普遍事实一致，使用一般现在时；'every person's life'应改为'everyone's life'更自然；'one of my father's birthday'表达不当，应改为'sometimes they forget their father's birthday'。

× That was very shame of myself since my father matters a lot to me.

✓ That was very shameful of me since my father matters a lot to me.

'shame'是名词，形容词应为'shameful'；'myself'用法不当，应该用宾格'me'。

× Of the most important thing to remember remembering my daily life is to have the regular routine such as I would go to exercising every day and I need to remember to take some medicine for my BA daily basis needs.

✓ The most important thing to remember in my daily life is to have a regular routine, such as exercising every day, and I need to remember to take some medicine for my BA on a daily basis.

'Of the most important thing'结构错误，应为'The most important thing'；'remember remembering'重复，应简化；'go to exercising'错误，正确表达为'exercising'；'daily basis needs'表达不当，应为'on a daily basis'。

× I would go to exercising every day

✓ I would exercise every day

动词'exercise'后不需要介词'to'，直接使用动词原形。

× take some medicine for my BA daily basis needs.

✓ take some medicine for my BA on a daily basis.

'daily basis'前应加介词'on'，表示频率。

× It's very difficult to remember everything in my life, but for one thing I would do is that I would take some notes and especially from the start of the day I will open up my phone and take some reminders to to remind myself of the coming task I need to achieve.

✓ It's very difficult to remember everything in my life, but one thing I do is take some notes. Especially at the start of the day, I open my phone and set reminders to remind myself of the tasks I need to complete.

句子过长且结构混乱，应拆分为多个句子；'for one thing I would do is that I would'表达冗余，应简化；'take some reminders to to remind'重复，应改为'set reminders to remind'；'coming task I need to achieve'表达不自然，应为'tasks I need to complete'。