记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 명확하게 구성하고 중복된 단어를 피하며, 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유를 포함하는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: Yes, I am good at memorizing because my favorite subjects, such as history and science, require a lot of memorization.

建議: 문법 오류와 중복 표현이 많습니다. 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 예시를 사용하여 답변을 간결하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always try to remember important promises or commitments carefully.

建議: 답변이 다소 중복되고 문법적으로 부자연스럽습니다. 주제 문장을 명확히 하고, 구체적인 내용을 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I need to remember my daily activities, so I write everything that happens in my diary every day.

建議: 답변이 불완전하고 문장이 중복되어 있습니다. 명확한 구조와 완성된 문장으로 답변을 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I usually make a list to avoid forgetting important things, and sometimes I write reminders on my hand.

× Yes, I think good at memorizing because my favorite subject are almost like memorizing subject like like history or like science, Yeah.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing because my favorite subjects are almost like memorizing subjects, like history or science.

The original sentence has singular and plural agreement issues. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' to match 'favorite subjects', and 'are' correctly agrees with the plural subject. Also, 'I think good' is incomplete and needs the verb 'am' to be grammatically correct.

× No, I've never forget something important because like if that really, really, really important things, I can't forget that.

✓ No, I've never forgotten something important because if it's really, really, really important, I can't forget it.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past participle form 'forgotten' to correctly follow 'have' in the present perfect tense. Also, 'things' should be singular 'thing' to agree with 'that', and 'can't forget that' is better as 'can't forget it' for pronoun consistency.

× Maybe my diary because like I'm writing diary every day now and in the diary like I write everything like happen in the day. So yes, there there is.

✓ Maybe my diary because I'm writing in my diary every day now, and in the diary, I write everything that happens during the day. So yes, there is.

The phrase 'there there is' is redundant and unclear. 'Writing diary' should be 'writing in my diary' to use the correct preposition. Also, 'everything like happen' should be 'everything that happens' to form a correct relative clause.

× I usually make the list that do not forget these things or something like that or like, oh, I I write the important things on my hands because if I write important things on my.

✓ I usually make a list so I do not forget these things or something like that. Oh, I write important things on my hands because if I write important things on my hands...

'The list' should be 'a list' as it is not a specific list previously mentioned. 'That do not forget' is incorrect; it should be 'so I do not forget' to express purpose. Also, 'my hands' is plural, so 'on my hands' is correct, but the sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished for clarity.