记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 문장 연결을 더 명확하게 하고, 약간 더 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 좋겠습니다. 예를 들어, 'For example' 이후에 구체적인 상황을 더 자세히 설명하고, 'To help with this' 부분에서 연결어를 사용해 문장 흐름을 부드럽게 만드는 연습을 하세요.

範例: I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget where I put my credit cards or phone, which can be frustrating. Therefore, I use reminders on my phone or write notes to help me remember important things.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고, 문장 구조가 불명확하여 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요하며, 시제와 단어 선택에 주의하세요. 또한, 문장 사이에 연결어를 사용해 논리적인 흐름을 만들어야 합니다.

範例: Yes, I once forgot the booking date for my Airbnb when I traveled to Australia last year. As a result, when I arrived, the host told me that the room was already booked by someone else.

建議: 답변이 구체적이고 논리적이며 자연스럽습니다. 다만, 문장 사이에 더 다양한 연결어를 사용하여 문장 흐름을 더욱 부드럽게 만들면 좋겠습니다. 예를 들어, 'because' 대신 'since'나 'as' 같은 연결어를 활용해 보세요.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to check the stock in my refrigerator regularly since food can spoil quickly even when refrigerated. For example, if I don't use fresh ingredients in time, I might have to throw them away, which is wasteful. Therefore, I try to plan my meals carefully.

建議: 답변이 전반적으로 이해되지만, 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'reminder or alarm apps' 대신 'reminder and alarm apps'를 사용하고, 마지막 문장은 'because they alert me quickly and clearly'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 문장 연결을 더 자연스럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Actually, I'm not very good at remembering important things, so I usually use reminder and alarm apps on my phone. These apps help me stay organized and ensure I never forget important texts or appointments. I find them very convenient and effective because they alert me quickly and clearly.

× Yeah I went to Australia last year and I reserved Airbnb but I'm confused my book date.

✓ Yeah, I went to Australia last year and I reserved an Airbnb, but I was confused about my booking date.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly and lacks proper prepositions and articles. 'I'm confused' should be 'I was confused' to match the past tense context. Also, 'reserved Airbnb' needs an article 'an' before 'Airbnb', and 'my book date' should be 'my booking date' with the preposition 'about'.

× So when I went to my accommodation my host said you are the room is already.

✓ So when I went to my accommodation, my host said the room was already booked.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It lacks proper sentence structure and verb agreement. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses past tense 'was' to match the context.

× I usually use reminder or alarm apps on my phone.

✓ I usually use reminder or alarm apps on my phone.

No correction needed here as 'reminder or alarm apps' is acceptable. However, if considering quantifiers, it might be better to say 'reminder or alarm app' or 'reminder and alarm apps' depending on meaning. Since the instruction is to correct only mistakes that meet the list, no change is made.

× These apps help me stay organized and make sure I never forget important text or appointments.

✓ These apps help me stay organized and make sure I never forget important texts or appointments.

The word 'text' should be plural 'texts' because it refers to multiple messages or pieces of text, matching the plural 'appointments'.

× I find them very convenient and effective because they are Alert me quickly and clearly.

✓ I find them very convenient and effective because they alert me quickly and clearly.

The phrase 'they are Alert me' is incorrect. 'Alert' should be a verb here, so 'they alert me' is correct. Also, 'Alert' should not be capitalized.