记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點重複（"quickly quickly"），且最後一句話不太清楚（"it helps me quit"）。建議你回答時避免重複用詞，並確保句子完整且清晰。此外，可以使用連接詞讓回答更流暢，例如使用"because"來解釋原因。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things, especially textbook content. For example, before history exams, I can quickly remember key figures and dates because the material is organized systematically. This ability helps me achieve decent scores.

建議: 回答中有些句子不完整且重複（"So it helps me. It helps memorize."），建議你用更完整的句子表達，並使用連接詞使語意連貫。此外，"meeting"應為複數形式"meetings"。

範例: I cannot recall any specific instance of forgetting something important because I always write down my important appointments and meetings in my planner. This habit helps me remember everything effectively.

建議: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和不完整的句子（"I always instead and alarming to remind me"），建議你使用正確的句型來表達，例如說明你使用鬧鐘提醒自己。此外，句子結構應更清晰，避免語意不明。

範例: Since I receive regular medical treatment, I need to remember to take my medicine at fixed times. Therefore, I always set alarms on my phone to remind me to take the medicine on time.

建議: 回答中有重複（"I will I will"）和不完整的句子（"so that the alarm"），建議你使用完整且流暢的句子，並用連接詞連接想法。可以說明你如何利用日記和手機鬧鐘來幫助記憶。

範例: Usually, I write down my appointments and schedules in my diary to prevent forgetting them. Also, I record them on my phone and set alarms to remind me at the right time.

× Yes, I think I'm quite good at memorizing the textbook content.

✓ Yes, I think I'm quite good at memorising the textbook content.

The original sentence uses 'memorizing' which is the American English spelling. Since the question uses 'memorising' (British English), it is better to keep consistent spelling. Both are correct but consistency is important.

× For instance, before the history exams I can quickly quickly remember the key figures and days, so that helps me get a decent score.

✓ For instance, before the history exams I can quickly remember the key figures and dates, so that helps me get a decent score.

The word 'quickly' is repeated twice, which is redundant. Also, 'days' is not the best word here; 'dates' is more appropriate when referring to history exam content. Removing the repeated adverb and correcting the noun improves clarity.

× I think it's because the content is more systematic so it helps me quit.

✓ I think it's because the content is more systematic, so it helps me quite a lot.

The original sentence ends with 'quit' which is incorrect in this context. It seems the intended word is 'quite' as an adverb modifying 'helps me'. Adding a comma before 'so' improves sentence structure.

× I cannot recall any specific instance right now, so I think I've never forgotten anything important because I have a habit of writing down all my important appointments or meeting on my planner.

✓ I cannot recall any specific instance right now, so I think I've never forgotten anything important because I have a habit of writing down all my important appointments or meetings in my planner.

The word 'meeting' should be plural 'meetings' to match 'appointments' (plural). Also, the preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to writing in a planner.

× So it helps me. It helps memorize.

✓ So it helps me. It helps me memorize.

The verb 'helps' requires an object or pronoun before the verb 'memorize'. Adding 'me' clarifies who is helped.

× Since I have received a regular medical treatment, I have to remember to take medicine at a fixed time.

✓ Since I have been receiving regular medical treatment, I have to remember to take medicine at a fixed time.

The phrase 'have received' suggests a completed action, but the context implies ongoing treatment, so present perfect continuous 'have been receiving' is more appropriate. Also, 'a regular medical treatment' should be 'regular medical treatment' without 'a'.

× Therefore, I always instead and alarming to remind me about taking the medicine preventing.

✓ Therefore, I always set an alarm to remind me to take the medicine on time.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Instead and alarming' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'set an alarm' which is a common expression, and clarifies the purpose of the alarm.

× A normal case is I usually write down my appointments or schedule in my diary preventing me from forgetting the schedule.

✓ Usually, I write down my appointments or schedule in my diary to prevent me from forgetting them.

The phrase 'A normal case is' is awkward and unnecessary. Also, 'preventing me from forgetting the schedule' should be changed to an infinitive phrase 'to prevent me from forgetting them' for clarity and correctness.

× Also I will I will record it on my on my phone so that the alarm.

✓ Also, I will record it on my phone so that the alarm reminds me.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive ('I will I will', 'on my on my'). Adding 'reminds me' completes the sentence logically. Also, adding commas improves readability.