记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some language errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. For example, "when it comes remembering" should be "when it comes to remembering," and "new adequacy" seems incorrect or unclear. Also, try to avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. To improve, focus on using correct prepositions and clearer vocabulary, and keep your sentences concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I have a good memory, especially for remembering people's names and faces. For instance, I can usually recall someone's name shortly after meeting them for the first time.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and unclear expressions. For example, "these mistakes directly affect my grades, which was quite adequate" is confusing and incorrect. Also, avoid starting sentences with filler words like "Well" unless necessary. To improve, make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and clearly express your ideas with appropriate vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I once forgot to submit an important assignment when I was in second grade. This mistake affected my grades negatively, which was disappointing because I had worked hard on the project.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors that make it difficult to understand. For example, "I usually said they're trying to complete my task" is confusing and incorrect. Also, "manage my times" should be "manage my time." To improve, focus on clear sentence structure and use simple, correct phrases to explain your ideas.

範例: I usually make a to-do list to keep track of my tasks, which helps me remember what I need to do every day. This method is an effective way to manage my time and stay organized.

建議: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are small grammatical errors such as missing articles and subject-verb agreement ("set alarm" should be "set an alarm," and "alarm remind" should be "alarm reminds"). To improve, pay attention to these small grammar details to make your speech more natural and accurate.

範例: To remember important things, I usually set an alarm on my smartphone because it helps me stay organized. For example, when I'm busy with other tasks, the alarm reminds me to complete my assignments on time.

× I have a good memory, especially when it comes remembering people's names and faces.

✓ I have a good memory, especially when it comes to remembering people's names and faces.

The phrase 'when it comes' should be followed by the preposition 'to' before a gerund. The correct expression is 'when it comes to remembering'. Omitting 'to' is a common prepositional error.

× I can easily recall the name of new adequacy shortly after meeting them.

✓ I can easily recall the name of new acquaintances shortly after meeting them.

The word 'adequacy' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'acquaintances', which is plural and refers to people one has met. Using the correct plural noun fits the context of meeting people and recalling their names.

× Well, these mistakes directly affect my grades, which was quite adequate.

✓ Well, these mistakes directly affected my grades, which were quite disappointing.

The verb 'was' does not agree with the plural subject 'grades'; it should be 'were'. Also, 'adequate' is not appropriate to describe grades negatively; 'disappointing' fits better. The tense is past, so 'affected' is correct.

× Disappointing because I had worked hard on the project.

✓ It was disappointing because I had worked hard on the project.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'It was' completes the sentence, making it grammatically correct.

× I usually said they're trying to complete my task, which helps me remember what I need to do everyday.

✓ I usually say I'm trying to complete my tasks, which helps me remember what I need to do every day.

The verb tense should be present 'say' to match the habitual action. 'They're' (they are) is incorrect; 'I'm' (I am) fits the context. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to indicate multiple items. 'Everyday' is an adjective; the correct adverb is 'every day'.

× This method is an effective way to manage my times and stay organized.

✓ This method is an effective way to manage my time and stay organized.

The noun 'time' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'times' in this context. Using 'time' singular is correct when referring to the general concept of time management.

× To remember important things, I usually set alarm on my smartphone because it helps me stay organized.

✓ To remember important things, I usually set an alarm on my smartphone because it helps me stay organized.

The noun 'alarm' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'an' before it. Omitting the article is incorrect.

× the alarm remind me to complete my assignment on time.

✓ the alarm reminds me to complete my assignment on time.

The singular subject 'alarm' requires the verb to be in third person singular form 'reminds'. Using 'remind' is incorrect here.