记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容不够连贯和完整。建议加强句子结构的准确性，避免重复词汇，并且提供更具体的细节来支持观点。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially numbers, because I am good at maths. For example, I can easily remember the amounts on a bill after seeing it once.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且内容不完整。建议练习完整表达思想，使用连贯的句子，并且具体说明忘记的重要事情和应对方法。

範例: I rarely forget important things because I usually take notes to remind myself. However, I sometimes forget small tasks, like helping my friends.

建議: 回答较为自然，但存在语气词过多和表达不够简洁的问题。建议减少填充词，使用更准确的词汇，并且使句子更流畅。

範例: I need to remember my daily tasks by making a to-do list. This helps me organise my routine and complete everything on time.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复的填充词，表达不够流畅。建议练习使用连贯的句子，减少语气词，并具体说明记忆方法。

範例: As I mentioned before, I usually take notes and stick them on the fridge or my desk. I also set alarms on my phone to remind me of important things.

× I think I can say good at remembering things, especially the numbers, because I do good at maths.

✓ I think I can say I'm good at remembering things, especially numbers, because I'm good at maths.

这里缺少了主语和be动词，且“the numbers”中的定冠词“the”不必要，应直接用复数名词“numbers”。另外，“do good at”应改为“I'm good at”，表示能力。

× For example, I may remember the the members on the bill.

✓ For example, I may remember the members on the bill.

句中出现了重复的定冠词“the the”，应删除一个。

× Once I saw it, I was really.

✓ Once I saw it, I was really surprised.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，导致表达不清，应补充完整。

× For the important things I really forgot them because usually I will take a note to alert my to remind myself.

✓ For important things, I really forget them because usually I will take a note to remind myself.

“alert my to remind myself”结构不正确，且“forgot”时态不符合上下文，应改为一般现在时“forget”。

× But like small things I I often forget them like I should help my.

✓ But for small things, I often forget them, like I should help myself.

“help my”应为反身代词“help myself”，表示自己帮助自己。

× Umm, I think the most important one is to make a list, A to do list.

✓ Umm, I think the most important thing is to make a list, a to-do list.

“one”用法不当，应使用“thing”表示事情；“A to do list”中“to do”应连字符连接为“to-do”。

× Like I can arrange my routine, my task, uh, what should I do the next day, in what time I should, uh, finish all these things.

✓ Like I can arrange my routine, my tasks, what I should do the next day, and when I should finish all these things.

“my task”应为复数“my tasks”；“in what time”表达不自然，应改为“when”。

× Umm, that's the most important so I can keep my life.

✓ Umm, that's the most important so I can keep my life organized.

“keep my life”表达不完整，缺少形容词或补语，补充“organized”使句子完整。

× Umm as I has, I have mentioned before, I usually take notes umm and maybe use a stick sticker to stick umm these notes on maybe the fridge, maybe on my desk and also I may uh, set an alarm in my phone umm like uh.

✓ Umm, as I have mentioned before, I usually take notes and maybe use sticky stickers to stick these notes on the fridge or on my desk, and also I may set an alarm on my phone.

“as I has”时态错误，应为“as I have”；“stick sticker”应为“sticky stickers”；“set an alarm in my phone”应为“set an alarm on my phone”。