记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は直接的で良いですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。より自然な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。例えば、"they said say to me that is very good" は不自然なので修正が必要です。

範例: Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things because I often remember details that my friends forget.

建議: 文法ミスと不完全な文が見られます。過去形の使い方や感情表現を正しく使い、文を完結させることが必要です。また、接続詞を使って文の流れを良くしましょう。

範例: Actually, I don't forget things often, but once I forgot the deadline of an important assignment, so I felt very upset.

建議: 内容は理解できますが、表現が少し不自然で繰り返しが多いです。より自然な表現と具体的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember the items I have to buy when I go shopping because I often buy many things at the supermarket.

建議: 回答は明確で具体的ですが、"in the same time" は不自然な表現です。より適切なフレーズを使い、話の流れをスムーズにしましょう。

範例: I remember important things by using a list on my smartphone. For example, when I have many assignments at the same time, I write down their deadlines.

× I feel it because I remember many things that my friends forget and they said say to me that is very good.

✓ I feel that because I remember many things that my friends forget, and they say to me that it is very good.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and verb form. 'They said say' is incorrect; it should be 'they say'. Also, 'that is very good' needs the pronoun 'it' to refer to the previous clause. Correct pronoun and verb usage improves clarity.

× Actually, I don't forget things so often, but one time I'd forgotten the deadline of my assignment and it was very important thing, so I upset and.

✓ Actually, I don't forget things so often, but one time I forgot the deadline of my assignment and it was a very important thing, so I was upset.

The sentence incorrectly uses past perfect 'I'd forgotten' where simple past 'I forgot' is appropriate. Also, 'so I upset and' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'so I was upset'. The article 'a' is missing before 'very important thing'. These corrections fix tense and sentence completeness.

× What I need to remember in daily life is what I have to buy when I go shopping.

✓ What I need to remember in daily life is what I have to buy when I go shopping.

No correction needed here as the preposition usage is correct.

× When I go to supermarket often, I usually buy many things, so I have to memorize it.

✓ When I go to the supermarket often, I usually buy many things, so I have to memorize them.

The phrase 'go to supermarket' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'memorize it' is incorrect because 'many things' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them'. Correct preposition and pronoun usage are necessary.

× I remember important things using the list of my smartphone.

✓ I remember important things by using the list on my smartphone.

The phrase 'using the list of my smartphone' is awkward. The correct preposition is 'on' to indicate the list is on the smartphone. Also, 'by using' is a clearer expression to indicate the method.