记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сіз жауаптарыңызды табиғи әрі нақты етіп құрастыруыңыз керек. Қайталауларды азайтып, сөйлемдерді қысқартуға тырысыңыз. Мысалы, 'I have big big problems' дегенді 'I have serious problems' деп айтуға болады.

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget what I've learned before.

建議: Жауабыңызда негізгі ойды анық көрсетіп, қосымша ақпаратты байланыстыру үшін 'because', 'so' сияқты сөздерді қолданыңыз. Сондай-ақ, сөйлемдерді қысқартуға тырысыңыз.

範例: Yes, I once forgot a close friend's birthday because I was very busy. I felt bad afterwards since it was an important day for her.

建議: Жауабыңызды нақты және қысқа етіп құрастырыңыз. Қайталауларды болдырмаңыз және сөйлемдерді дұрыс құрылымдаңыз.

範例: I need to remember to do my homework every day because I have many assignments despite being busy.

建議: Жауабыңызды түсінікті және табиғи етіп құрастырыңыз. Мысалы, 'make my schedule before in my phone' дегенді 'make a schedule on my phone' деп айтуға болады.

範例: I usually make a schedule on my phone and add new tasks to it so I can remember important things easily.

× I really I have big big problems with my memory because I almost every time forget everything I've learned before.

✓ I really have big problems with my memory because I almost always forget everything I've learned before.

The phrase 'I really I have big big problems' contains a redundancy and awkward structure. Also, 'almost every time' is better expressed as 'almost always' to fit present tense usage smoothly.

× Yes I have and one of the most important things that I have forgotten was my one of the close friends birthday because we were supposed to celebrate it on the same day but I got really busy and didn't even like send her a message.

✓ Yes, I have, and one of the most important things that I have forgotten was one of my close friend's birthdays because we were supposed to celebrate it on the same day, but I got really busy and didn't even send her a message.

The phrase 'my one of the close friends birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my close friend's birthdays' to show possession and correct singular/plural form. Also, 'didn't even like send' is incorrect; 'like' is unnecessary here and should be removed for correct past tense usage.

× When one thing that I should to remember in my daily life is maybe doing my homework because I'm a student and I have have many and many practices to do at home, at school, everywhere, despite the fact that I'm busy with other things.

✓ One thing that I should remember in my daily life is maybe doing my homework because I'm a student and I have many practices to do at home, at school, everywhere, despite the fact that I'm busy with other things.

The phrase 'should to remember' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'should' are followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Also, 'have have many and many practices' is redundant and should be 'have many practices'.

× I always try to make my schedule before in my phone so when I have something to add like something new, something like tasks, I just add it to my already done schedule and I always see it.

✓ I always try to make my schedule in my phone beforehand, so when I have something to add, like something new or tasks, I just add it to my existing schedule and I always see it.

The phrase 'make my schedule before in my phone' is awkward; 'in my phone beforehand' is clearer. Also, 'already done schedule' is better expressed as 'existing schedule' to fit present tense and natural usage.