记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，直接回答问题并给出具体例子。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details easily. For example, I sometimes forget where I put my keys.

建議: 回答较简单，缺少细节和连贯性。建议提供更具体的例子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I forgot what I ate for breakfast, which made it hard to track my diet that day.

建議: 回答内容重复且表达不够准确。建议使用更具体的词汇，避免重复，并用连接词组织句子。

範例: I need to remember my daily schedule, such as study plans and tasks I have to complete, because these help me stay organized.

建議: 回答较完整，但句子结构有些混乱。建议简化表达，使用更自然的句型，并注意连贯性。

範例: I usually write notes to remember important things. For example, I write down my daily schedule, which helps me feel more relaxed and organized.

× I think I'm not really good at memorizing things because I really easy to forget something and I can't remember it, but it's difficult for me.

✓ I think I'm not really good at memorizing things because I am really easy to forget things and I can't remember them, but it's difficult for me.

这里'something'和'it'的使用不当，应该用复数形式'things'和'them'，因为前文提到的是复数的记忆内容。

× I think I'm not really good at memorizing things because I really easy to forget something and I can't remember it, but it's difficult for me.

✓ I think I'm not really good at memorizing things because I am really easy to forget something and I can't remember it, but it's difficult for me.

缺少系动词'am'，导致句子结构不完整。'I really easy'应改为'I am really easy'。

× Yes, I've forgotten something important. For example, I have forgotten what I eat in the morning and then it's really bad for me.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten something important. For example, I have forgotten what I ate in the morning and then it's really bad for me.

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去式，'eat'应改为'ate'。

× I think I need to remember the schedule for me, for example, what I need to study and what I need to do today and many many, many things is really important.

✓ I think I need to remember the schedule for me, for example, what I need to study and what I need to do today and many, many things are really important.

'many things'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。

× I think I need to remember the schedule for me, for example, what I need to study and what I need to do today and many many, many things is really important.

✓ I think I need to remember my schedule, for example, what I need to study and what I need to do today, and many, many things are really important.

'the schedule for me'表达不自然，应该用'my schedule'，更符合英语习惯。

× I usually write a note to remember some things important.

✓ I usually write a note to remember some important things.

形容词'important'应放在名词'things'前面，且'important things'是固定搭配。

× For example, I like to write the schedule which I made for the day and I feel it's really relaxed if I write it and I can see it.

✓ For example, I like to write the schedule which I made for the day and I feel really relaxed if I write it and I can see it.

'relaxed'是形容词，前面不需要加'really'，但这里表达感受时'really relaxed'是正确的，原句中多了'is'，应去掉。