记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的句型，并且避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以用简单明了的句子表达你的记忆能力，并举具体例子。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I often remember important events with my friends, which makes me feel emotional sometimes.

建議: 回答时要注意语法和句子结构，避免重复和语音错误。建议先直接回答问题，然后用连词连接具体细节，表达清晰且有条理。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once forgot my pencil and erasers at home on the day of an important exam, which made me very nervous. However, I still managed to get high marks.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用简单句子，先给出主题句，再用连词补充具体细节，内容要具体且相关。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember the tasks I have to complete each day. For example, I usually plan my schedule in advance to make sure I finish everything on time.

建議: 回答较为简单且有口语填充词“umm”，建议去除填充词，使用连词使句子更连贯，并且丰富细节。

範例: I remember important things by writing them down in my notes or saving reminders on my phone. Sometimes, I also keep a diary to record important events and thoughts.

× Yes, I'm good at memory things.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorising things.

The phrase 'memory things' is incorrect because 'memory' is a noun and does not describe 'things' properly here. The correct form is 'memorising things' where 'memorising' is a verb acting as a gerund to describe the activity. Use the gerund form to express ability in an action.

× and the memories always from my friend and I and the things we often don't have done.

✓ and the memories are always from my friend and me and the things we often haven't done.

The pronoun 'I' is incorrect here because it is the object of the preposition 'from'; the correct object pronoun is 'me'. Also, 'don't have done' is incorrect; the present perfect negative form 'haven't done' should be used to indicate actions not completed.

× I remember that. It is a very, very important exam and I forgot my pencil and rubbers.

✓ I remember that. It was a very, very important exam and I forgot my pencil and rubbers.

The exam happened in the past, so the verb 'is' should be in past tense 'was' to maintain tense consistency. 'Forgot' is correctly in past tense.

× I live, I left the, I left them in my home and I'm really, really nervous about this.

✓ I left them at home and I was really, really nervous about it.

'I live' is incorrect and unnecessary here. 'Left' is correct past tense. 'In my home' is better expressed as 'at home'. 'I'm' (present tense) should be 'I was' to match past tense context. 'About this' should be 'about it' referring to the exam.

× I think I need to remember the things what should I do every day in my daily life.

✓ I think I need to remember the things that I should do every day in my daily life.

The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrect here; 'that' should be used to introduce a defining relative clause. The sentence is in present tense and should maintain correct relative pronoun usage.

× Like I often like plan a schedule date every day, what things that I should to finish and it is really important.

✓ Like, I often like to plan a schedule every day, the things that I should finish and it is really important.

'Plan a schedule date' is awkward; 'plan a schedule' is better. 'What things that I should to finish' is incorrect; 'the things that I should finish' is correct. The infinitive 'to' should be used after 'like' when followed by a verb: 'like to plan'. Also, 'schedule date' is not a common collocation.

× I remember the important things by umm, writing them on my notes or I will put it on my phone and maybe to write some diary instead.

✓ I remember important things by writing them in my notes or I put them on my phone and maybe write a diary instead.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'notes'; 'in my notes' is correct. 'I will put it' should be 'I put them' to maintain tense consistency and plural agreement. 'Maybe to write some diary' is incorrect; 'maybe write a diary' is correct. 'Diary' is a countable noun and needs an article 'a'.