记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。"memory things"は不適切で、"memorizing things"や"good at remembering things"が自然です。また、内容が曖昧で具体性に欠けています。5文以内で簡潔に、かつ具体的な例を用いて答える練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember important tasks at work and details from meetings. This helps me stay organised and efficient throughout the day.

建議: 内容が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。"IHOP"の意味が不明で、話の流れが途切れています。具体的な状況を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, last year I forgot an important work meeting. I felt very sorry because I missed a valuable opportunity to discuss a project with my team.

建議: 言いたいことは伝わりますが、文法と語順の誤りが多く、冗長な表現もあります。"memo"は"a memo"や"notes"の方が自然です。簡潔で正確な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をしましょう。

範例: I usually write memos to remember my daily tasks. Then, I check them several times a day to make sure I don't forget anything important.

建議: 同じ表現の繰り返しがあり、内容がやや単調です。"memo apps"は"memo app"や"note-taking app"の方が自然です。接続詞を使い、理由や方法を具体的に説明する練習をしましょう。

範例: I am generally good at remembering things, but for important events, I use a note-taking app. Every morning, I check the app to review my schedule and make sure I don't miss anything.

× Yes, I'm good at memory things.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'memory things' is incorrect because 'memory' is a noun and cannot directly modify 'things' here. The correct form is to use the verb 'memorizing' to describe the action related to 'things'.

× I saw something at sight at first sight.

✓ I saw something at first sight.

The phrase 'at sight at first sight' is redundant and incorrect. The correct expression is 'at first sight' to indicate immediate perception.

× I remember most of the things and especially I'm good at memorizing what's happening and what I'm going to do in the work.

✓ I remember most things and especially I'm good at memorizing what's happening and what I'm going to do at work.

The phrase 'most of the things' is awkward; 'most things' is more natural. Also, 'in the work' should be 'at work' to correctly indicate the workplace.

× Yes, IHOP last year I forgot the important appointment with, uh, my about my work meeting and I, I had to sorry so deeply and I missed the important opportunity to work.

✓ Yes, last year I forgot an important appointment about my work meeting and I was very sorry. I missed an important opportunity to work.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'IHOP' seems to be a mishearing and is removed; 'had to sorry so deeply' is incorrect, should be 'was very sorry'; 'the important appointment with, uh, my about my work meeting' is confusing and corrected to 'an important appointment about my work meeting'; articles 'an' are added appropriately.

× I usually use umm memo to write down what's going to what am I going to do or what is going to happen in this day.

✓ I usually use a memo to write down what I am going to do or what is going to happen during the day.

The phrase 'what's going to what am I going to do' is incorrect and confusing. It is corrected to 'what I am going to do'. Also, 'in this day' is better expressed as 'during the day'. The article 'a' is added before 'memo'.

× And I check the memo so many times in the day to make sure that what we are I'm I'm going to do.

✓ And I check the memo many times during the day to make sure of what I am going to do.

The phrase 'so many times in the day' is awkward; 'many times during the day' is more natural. Also, 'what we are I'm I'm going to do' is incorrect and corrected to 'what I am going to do'.

× As I mentioned, I am good. I am good at remembering things.

✓ As I mentioned, I am good at remembering things.

The sentence 'I am good.' is incomplete and redundant. Combining the two sentences improves clarity.

× But I sometimes make a memo about the important things and every day I wake up, I check the memo apps to make sure that there is important event.

✓ But I sometimes make a memo about important things and every day when I wake up, I check the memo app to make sure that there is an important event.

The phrase 'the important things' is better as 'important things' without 'the'. 'Memo apps' should be singular 'memo app' if referring to one app. Also, 'there is important event' needs the article 'an' before 'important event'. Added 'when' for clarity.