记忆— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
Sadly, I'm not good at memorizing. I remember that I was pretty good at it when I was young, but now I forget things. I just hope. Hmm. Actually I cannot remember my family's phone number aside from my own ones.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Yes I have. For example I have forgot the utility bill due dates and I have forgotten my wallet or umbrella a few times. The most memorable thing recently was when I forgot the front door password and had to call my younger sibling.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
There are many things I need to remember in my daily life, but among them, I absolutely must remember my payday. This is because that is the day when my bank account balance is the highest. It is also very important to remember my family's birthdays, otherwise they might be very upset.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
In the past I used to make notes in my diary. However, I don't check those things of these days, so I try to register my schedule on my phone. Then on alarm you sound the day before or an hour before. If it's really important, I try to share it with people around me or make it big on the calendar.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分數: 70.0建議: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 'I just hope. Hmm.' 같은 불필요한 표현은 피하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 문장 연결이 매끄럽지 않고, 구체적인 예시가 부족합니다. 문장 수는 적절하지만, 더 명확한 주제문과 구체적인 세부사항을 추가해 보세요.
範例: I'm not very good at memorising things nowadays, although I used to be better when I was younger. For example, I often forget my family's phone numbers except my own. This shows that my memory has declined over time.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分數: 85.0建議: 답변이 구체적이고 자연스럽지만, 문장 연결을 위한 접속사를 더 활용하면 좋겠습니다. 예를 들어, 'For example' 외에도 'Moreover'나 'Recently' 같은 연결어를 사용해 문장 간 흐름을 개선할 수 있습니다.
範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once missed the utility bill due date. Moreover, I have forgotten my wallet or umbrella a few times. Recently, I forgot the front door password and had to call my younger sibling for help.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分數: 90.0建議: 답변이 명확하고 구체적이며, 이유도 잘 설명되어 있습니다. 다만, 문장 간 연결을 위해 'Firstly', 'Secondly' 같은 순서 연결어를 사용하면 더 논리적이고 자연스러운 답변이 될 것입니다.
範例: There are many things I need to remember daily. Firstly, I must remember my payday because that's when my bank account balance is the highest. Secondly, remembering my family's birthdays is very important to avoid upsetting them.
How do you remember important things?
分數: 80.0建議: 답변이 구체적이지만, 문법적 오류('on alarm you sound')와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 또한, 문장 연결이 다소 단절되어 자연스러운 흐름을 위해 접속사를 활용하는 것이 좋습니다.
範例: In the past, I used to make notes in my diary. However, nowadays I register my schedule on my phone, which then sounds an alarm a day or an hour before. If something is really important, I share it with people around me or mark it prominently on the calendar.
文法
× For example I have forgot the utility bill due dates and I have forgotten my wallet or umbrella a few times.
✓ For example, I have forgotten the utility bill due dates and I have forgotten my wallet or umbrella a few times.
The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after 'have' (present perfect), the past participle 'forgotten' should be used. 'Have forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'have forgotten'.
× Actually I cannot remember my family's phone number aside from my own ones.
✓ Actually, I cannot remember my family's phone number aside from my own.
The pronoun 'ones' is unnecessary and incorrect here because 'phone number' is singular and already implied. Using 'own' alone is sufficient to refer to 'my own phone number'.
× However, I don't check those things of these days, so I try to register my schedule on my phone.
✓ However, I don't check those things these days, so I try to register my schedule on my phone.
The phrase 'of these days' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'these days' without 'of' to indicate the current time period.
× Then on alarm you sound the day before or an hour before.
✓ Then an alarm sounds the day before or an hour before.
The original sentence has incorrect word order and subject-verb agreement. 'Alarm' is singular and should be the subject, so 'an alarm sounds' is correct. Also, 'on alarm you sound' is incorrect placement of words.
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