记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语言不够自然，表达重复且结构混乱。建议简洁明了地直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达原因。

範例: I'm average at memorising things. When I was a child, I participated in English competitions that involved remembering words, but I wasn't the best. Also, I find it difficult to memorise subjects like maths and physics.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复，并具体描述事件。

範例: Yes, I have. For example, when I was younger, I often forgot my house keys when I went out. This made me unable to open the door, and I felt embarrassed to ask my mom for help.

建議: 回答内容较简单，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词丰富句子，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my study tasks and the chores my parents ask me to do. Besides that, I also keep track of my daily exercise routine.

建議: 回答中表达不够自然，存在语法和用词错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并具体说明记忆方法。

範例: I try to remember important things in my mind, but if they are complicated, I write them down or use reminder apps on my phone.

× I think just so so because, you know, I attend English competition about about remembering words when I was a child, but I'm not the best when I, when I'm competing with others and I'm not skilled in learning maths and physics or.

✓ I think just so so because, you know, I attended English competitions about remembering words when I was a child, but I'm not the best when I compete with others and I'm not skilled in learning maths and physics.

这里的时间是过去，所以动词 attend 应该用过去式 attended；另外，competitions 应该用复数形式，因为通常是多次比赛；when I'm competing 应改为 when I compete，保持一般现在时，表示习惯动作。

× Yes exactly, for example, I always forgot the key when I was get out when I was girl went out.

✓ Yes exactly, for example, I always forgot the key when I was getting out when I was a girl going out.

这里的 get out 应该用现在分词 getting 作为进行时态；was girl 应该加冠词 a，变成 a girl；went out 应该改为 going out，保持进行时态。

× So I always can't open my house open the door in my house.

✓ So I always can't open the door of my house.

这里的表达不自然，应该用 open the door of my house 来表示“开我家的门”，而不是重复使用 open。

× It makes me very embarrassing to to see help to my mom to open the door.

✓ It makes me very embarrassed to ask my mom to help open the door.

embarrassing 是形容事物的，表示“令人尴尬的”，这里应该用形容人的 embarrassed；see help to my mom 结构错误，应该是 ask my mom to help。

× First of all, the study task and the choices that parents let me to do, and then the exercise task, what I need to do every day.

✓ First of all, the study tasks and the choices that my parents let me do, and then the exercise tasks that I need to do every day.

tasks 应该用复数；parents 后面缺少所有格 my；let 后面不加 to，直接用动词原形 do；exercise task 也应为复数 tasks；what I need to do 应改为 that I need to do，更正式。

× Sometimes I will remember it with my brain, but if The thing is very complex I will write it down or Remember Me in my with my phones or apps.

✓ Sometimes I will remember it in my mind, but if the thing is very complex I will write it down or remind myself with my phone or apps.

remember it with my brain 不自然，应该用 in my mind；Remember Me 是错误用法，应该用 remind myself；phones 应该用单数 phone，因为通常指手机；大小写错误，The 应该小写。