记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your sentences grammatically correct and more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say: "No, I'm not very good at memorising things, but with constant repetition, I can gradually absorb the information and apply it sooner."

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, but with constant repetition, I can gradually absorb the information and apply it sooner.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to explain cause and effect. For example: "Yes, recently I was pregnant and have already delivered. Because of that, my brain seems to have shrunk, and I tend to forget things like where I put my money or clothes."

範例: Yes, recently I was pregnant and have already delivered. Because of that, my brain seems to have shrunk, and I tend to forget things like where I put my money or clothes.

建議: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using proper sentence structure and linking words. For example: "There are three main things I need to remember daily: people, time, and places. For instance, I need to remember where I am going and when I will come back."

範例: There are three main things I need to remember daily: people, time, and places. For instance, I need to remember where I am going and when I will come back.

建議: Use clearer sentence structure and linking words to explain your process. For example: "Usually, I remember things while walking. For example, I once forgot where I put my ID, but after walking outside the house, I remembered that I had hung it on the back of the cabinet door."

範例: Usually, I remember things while walking. For example, I once forgot where I put my ID, but after walking outside the house, I remembered that I had hung it on the back of the cabinet door.

× No, but if constant repetition it will slowly absorb in my mind and I can apply it sooner.

✓ No, but with constant repetition, it will slowly be absorbed in my mind and I can apply it sooner.

The original sentence has a sentence structure error due to missing preposition 'with' before 'constant repetition' and missing passive voice 'be absorbed'. Adding 'with' clarifies the condition, and using passive voice 'be absorbed' correctly describes the process happening to 'it'.

× Yes, with recent event I got pregnant and delivered already.

✓ Yes, with a recent event, I got pregnant and have already delivered.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'recent event' and the tense for 'delivered' should be present perfect 'have delivered' to indicate a recent past action with relevance to the present.

× My brain seems like it shrink.

✓ My brain seems like it shrinks.

The verb 'shrink' should be in the third person singular present tense 'shrinks' to agree with the subject 'it'.

× I tend to forget things like where did I get the money or where did I get the clothes, something like that.

✓ I tend to forget things like where I put the money or where I put the clothes, something like that.

In indirect questions, the word order should be subject + verb, not question form. So 'where did I get' should be 'where I put' to correctly express forgetting the location of items.

× For me namely 3 things Person, time and place.

✓ For me, namely 3 things: person, time, and place.

The sentence needs a colon after 'things' to introduce the list, and the word 'Person' should be lowercase to match the list format.

× For me these three things needs to be remembered daily.

✓ For me, these three things need to be remembered daily.

The subject 'these three things' is plural, so the verb should be 'need' instead of 'needs' to agree in number.

× Place for example, I don't know where you. You're going, oh, you will come back.

✓ For example, place: I don't know where you are going, or when you will come back.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reordering and completing the sentence with proper clauses and punctuation improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Usually I remember things while walking.

✓ Usually, I remember things while walking.

Adding a comma after 'Usually' improves readability but the sentence is grammatically correct otherwise.

× For example I forgot where did I get my ID and then after walking or going outside the house I remembered where I placed it.

✓ For example, I forgot where I put my ID, but after walking or going outside the house, I remembered where I placed it.

In indirect questions, the word order should be subject + verb ('where I put'), not question form. Also, adding commas improves sentence flow.

× It was like in the cabinet I hung it the back of the door so.

✓ It was like I hung it on the back of the door in the cabinet.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing prepositions. Correcting the order and adding 'on' clarifies the location and action.