记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with clear and concise sentences. Avoid redundancy and use correct verb tenses.

範例: I am somewhat good at memorizing things, but sometimes I forget important information while remembering unnecessary details very well. This can be frustrating for me, and I consider it a bad habit.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific details. Avoid using unclear words like 'transparent' and 'hideous' incorrectly.

範例: Yes, once in college, I completely forgot about an assignment deadline. It was very embarrassing for me because I missed submitting it on time.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains awkward phrasing. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain why it is important.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember the prayer times because, as a Muslim, praying on time is very important to me.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes and expand your explanation slightly.

範例: I usually keep a schedule on my phone and use an app to remind me of important tasks. However, sometimes I still forget, which can be frustrating.

× Yeah, sometimes I forgot something important or sometime the unnecessary things I memorized very well and it is very arduous for me and I feel it's a bad habit about me at some.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I forget something important or sometimes the unnecessary things I memorize very well and it is very arduous for me and I feel it's a bad habit about me sometimes.

The student used 'forgot' and 'memorized' which are past tense forms, but the context is about habitual actions, so the present tense 'forget' and 'memorize' should be used. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× Transparent I when I was in college and in my assignment date, I was completely forgotten about my my assignment.

✓ When I was in college and on my assignment due date, I completely forgot about my assignment.

The phrase 'was completely forgotten' is incorrect because 'forgot' is an active verb here; the student should use the simple past 'forgot' to indicate the action they performed. Also, 'Transparent I' is unclear and removed for clarity. 'Assignment date' should be 'assignment due date' and 'my my' is a repetition.

× So it's very hideous for me.

✓ So it's very embarrassing for me.

'Hideous' is used to describe something very ugly or unpleasant visually, which is inappropriate here. The student likely meant 'embarrassing' to express feeling ashamed or uncomfortable.

× I obligatory remember that as a Muslim, my prayer time is almost crucial for me and it's very remarkable that I need to must be memorized the prayer time let's.

✓ I always remember that as a Muslim, my prayer time is very important to me and it's necessary that I memorize the prayer times.

'Obligatory' is an adjective and cannot be used as an adverb; 'always' fits better. 'Almost crucial' is awkward; 'very important' is clearer. 'I need to must be memorized' is incorrect; it should be 'I need to memorize' or 'I must memorize'. Also, 'let's' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× I usually keep a schedule in my phone.

✓ I usually keep a schedule on my phone.

'In my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to something stored or kept on a device.

× I always use an app to remember this kind of obligatory things in circumstance.

✓ I always use an app to remember these kinds of obligatory things in such circumstances.

'This kind of' should be 'these kinds of' to agree with the plural 'things'. Also, 'in circumstance' is incorrect; 'in such circumstances' is appropriate.

× Sometime I forgot so that's it.

✓ Sometimes I forget, so that's it.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Forgot' is past tense, but the context suggests habitual action, so 'forget' in present tense is correct.