记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct plural forms.

範例: No, I'm not good at memorising things. Therefore, I always set reminders on my phone for important events, such as the birthdays of my loved ones.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas logically using linking words like 'however' or 'so'. Also, be specific and clear about what happened to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I forgot the deadline to submit my assignment last week. Unfortunately, I only received a reminder notification at the last moment, so I had to complete the assignment, which usually takes three days, in just four hours.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to prepare your response to avoid fillers like 'umm' and 'uh'. Use complete sentences and organise your ideas clearly with linking words. Also, be specific about the tasks you need to remember.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks such as buying groceries, doing the laundry, setting the alarm to wake up early for work, and maintaining a healthy diet.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct sentence structures.

範例: As I mentioned earlier, I find it difficult to remember important things, so I usually set reminders on my phone. For example, I get notifications for my husband's birthday.

× No, I'm not good at all at memorizing thing.

✓ No, I'm not good at all at memorizing things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items to memorize, not just one.

× for example all the birthdays of my lovable person whom I admire is set as a reminder on my phone.

✓ for example all the birthdays of my lovable person whom I admire are set as reminders on my phone.

The subject 'all the birthdays' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match multiple birthdays.

× Unfortunately, I received a reminder notification from now every use for submission.

✓ Unfortunately, I received a reminder notification just now for the submission.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'From now every use for submission' is not proper English. The correction clarifies the timing and purpose of the notification.

× Then the assignment that used to complete in three days or more have to be completed in just four hours.

✓ Then the assignment that used to be completed in three days or more had to be completed in just four hours.

The subject 'assignment' is singular, so the verb should be 'had' instead of 'have'. Also, 'used to complete' should be 'used to be completed' to form the passive voice correctly.

× I need to remember many things in my daily life from umm, buying groceries to, uh, wash, uh, to do the long, uh, to do the laundry and then, uh, set, uh, up the alarm, uh, to wake up for work early in the morning and additionally eating well and.

✓ I need to remember many things in my daily life, from buying groceries to washing clothes, doing the laundry, setting the alarm to wake up early for work, and additionally eating well.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'Wash' should be 'washing' to match the gerund form used with 'from...to'. Also, 'to do the long' is unclear and removed for clarity. The sentence is restructured for better flow.

× As mentioned earlier, I hardly able to remember things or to remember important things and in my life I usually set up remind reminders over my phone.

✓ As mentioned earlier, I am hardly able to remember things or important things, so in my life I usually set up reminders on my phone.

The phrase 'I hardly able' is missing the verb 'am'. Also, 'set up remind reminders' is incorrect; it should be 'set up reminders'. The sentence is corrected for proper verb usage and pronoun clarity.