记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь давать чёткий и связный ответ, избегая лишних повторов и неясных выражений. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и старайтесь быть конкретнее.

範例: Yes, I believe I have a good memory. For example, I can easily remember important facts and numbers, although sometimes I forget small details like names. In the past, I used to memorize everything for math, but now I focus on remembering only what is necessary.

建議: Ответ содержит много ошибок и неясностей, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется строить предложения проще и логичнее, использовать связующие слова и конкретные детали, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным.

範例: Yes, I forgot something important two years ago. My father asked me to take out the rubbish, but I forgot his request. He was very angry and disappointed, and I felt really sad about it.

建議: Ответ слишком длинный и немного запутанный. Старайтесь выражать мысли чётко и кратко, используя связующие слова для логичности. Также избегайте повторов и грамматических ошибок.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my habits, what I did yesterday, and any unfinished tasks. It is important for me to complete the tasks I planned before, so I focus on memorizing them carefully.

建議: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Рекомендуется использовать простые и понятные предложения, избегать повторов и грамматических ошибок, а также использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: That's an interesting question. I remember important things by paying close attention when someone speaks. Even if I meet a stranger, I try to remember what they say because I have a good memory.

× I think that I have really good memory because I can sometimes forget a little details about something like names or something else surname.

✓ I think that I have a really good memory because I can sometimes forget a few details about something like names or surnames.

The word 'memory' is a singular countable noun here and requires an article 'a'. 'A little details' is incorrect because 'details' is plural; it should be 'a few details'. 'Something else surname' is unclear and should be 'surnames' to match plural form.

× But I used to memorize as math everything, but now I don't.

✓ But I used to memorize everything like math, but now I don't.

The phrase 'as math everything' is incorrect in word order and preposition use. It should be 'everything like math' to correctly express the meaning. The past tense 'used to' is correctly used here.

× Also I can be.

✓ Also, I can do that.

The sentence 'Also I can be.' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks an object or complement after 'can be'. Adding 'do that' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.

× Yes, and it was two years ago my father sent me to through the rubbish, into the rush and I forgot this, my father's sentence and I was really sad because he was so angry at me and he was disappointed.

✓ Yes, two years ago my father sent me through the rubbish, and I forgot his sentence. I was really sad because he was so angry at me and disappointed.

The phrase 'to through the rubbish, into the rush' is incorrect; 'sent me through the rubbish' is correct. 'I forgot this, my father's sentence' is awkward; 'I forgot his sentence' is clearer. The sentence is long and should be split for clarity.

× Yes, and it was two years ago my father sent me to through the rubbish, into the rush and I forgot this, my father's sentence and I was really sad because he was so angry at me and he was disappointed.

✓ Yes, two years ago my father sent me through the rubbish, and I forgot his sentence. I was really sad because he was so angry at me and disappointed.

The preposition 'to' before 'through the rubbish' is unnecessary and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'sent me through the rubbish'. Also, 'into the rush' is unclear and likely a mistake.

× I forgot this, my father's sentence and I was really sad because he was so angry at me and he was disappointed.

✓ I forgot his sentence, and I was really sad because he was so angry at me and disappointed.

Using 'this' to refer to 'my father's sentence' is awkward. Using 'his' is more natural and grammatically correct. Also, 'he was disappointed' can be shortened to 'and disappointed' for conciseness.

× I can sometimes forget a little details about something like names or something else surname.

✓ I can sometimes forget a few details about things like names or surnames.

'A little details' is incorrect because 'details' is countable plural; it should be 'a few details'. 'Something else surname' is unclear and should be 'surnames'.

× I can sometimes forget a little details about something like names or something else surname.

✓ I can sometimes forget a few details about things like names or surnames.

The preposition 'about' is correct here, but 'something like names or something else surname' is awkward. Replacing with 'things like names or surnames' improves clarity and correctness.

× I can remember every word what what some what someone said me even stranger will talking with me.

✓ I can remember every word that someone said to me, even if a stranger is talking with me.

The phrase 'what what some what someone said me' is incorrect and confusing. The correct relative pronoun is 'that', and the verb requires the preposition 'to' after 'said'. 'Even stranger will talking with me' is incorrect; it should be 'even if a stranger is talking with me'.

× I can remember every word what what some what someone said me even stranger will talking with me.

✓ I can remember every word that someone said to me, even if a stranger is talking with me.

The conjunction 'what' is incorrectly used multiple times. The correct conjunction is 'that'. Also, 'even stranger will talking' is incorrect; 'even if a stranger is talking' is correct.

× I can remember every word what what some what someone said me even stranger will talking with me.

✓ I can remember every word that someone said to me, even if a stranger is talking with me.

The verb 'said' requires the preposition 'to' before the indirect object 'me'. The phrase 'said me' is incorrect.

× It's so ingenuity question.

✓ It's such an ingenious question.

'Ingenuity' is a noun, but an adjective is needed to describe 'question'. The correct adjective is 'ingenious'. Also, 'so' should be replaced with 'such an' before a noun phrase.

× I don't want to remember everything because I can remember my daily habit and what I did yesterday or my unfinished tasks because it is really important for me I finish my task which I plan planned before and furthermore it's really successful to memorize.

✓ I don't want to remember everything because I can remember my daily habits, what I did yesterday, and my unfinished tasks. It is really important for me to finish the tasks I planned before, and furthermore, it's really effective to memorize.

'Daily habit' should be plural 'daily habits'. 'Plan planned' is redundant; 'planned' alone is sufficient. 'Successful to memorize' is incorrect; 'effective to memorize' or 'successful memorization' is better.