记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“try to get me more memorizer”不符合英语习惯。建议你用简单且正确的句子表达自己的观点，同时避免冗余。可以说“I find it hard to memorize English spelling, but I try to improve by practicing regularly.”

範例: I am not very good at memorising things, especially English spelling. However, I try to improve by practicing regularly and using flashcards.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达混乱的问题，且句子不连贯。建议你直接回答问题，并用清晰的句子说明你如何避免忘记重要事情。比如“I usually write down important tasks to remember them. Once, I forgot to bring something for a task, which was quite troublesome.”

範例: I usually write down important things to remember. Once, I forgot to bring my homework to school, which was very embarrassing.

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱。建议你用简洁的句子直接回答问题，并用连接词使表达更流畅。比如“I need to remember my class schedule, homework, and English vocabulary to manage my daily life well.”

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my class times, homework assignments, and English vocabulary to study effectively.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议你用简洁且连贯的句子说明你的方法。比如“I write important things on a checklist and review it every morning to make sure I don't forget anything.”

範例: I write important tasks on a checklist and check it every morning to remember what I need to do during the day.

× I think it's very hard for me to memorize the word spelling so but I try to get me more memorizer.

✓ I think it's very hard for me to memorize the spelling of words, but I try to become better at memorizing.

The original sentence misuses 'memorizer' and has awkward phrasing. 'Memorizer' is not commonly used; instead, 'memorizing' as a gerund fits better. Also, 'word spelling' should be 'spelling of words' for correct noun phrase structure.

× And I think the most terrible things I've forgotten is just when I'm I, when I'm have my task I forget you to take.

✓ And I think the worst thing I've forgotten is when I have a task, I forget to take something.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect phrases like 'when I'm I' and 'I forget you to take'. The corrected sentence simplifies and clarifies the meaning, fixing sentence structure and verb usage.

× And I think the most terrible things I've forgotten is just when I'm I, when I'm have my task I forget you to take.

✓ And I think the worst thing I've forgotten is when I have a task, I forget to take something.

The phrase 'I forget you to take' incorrectly uses 'you' instead of the infinitive 'to take'. The correction removes the incorrect pronoun and uses the correct infinitive verb form.

× When classes became when I go to school and after school and my homework and I need you to study English.

✓ When classes begin, when I go to school and after school, and with my homework, I need to study English.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'became' incorrectly. 'Need you to study' is incorrect; it should be 'need to study'. The correction clarifies the sentence and corrects verb forms.

× So I need to memorizing the vocabulary and this is yes, I think it's enough to have a good life.

✓ So I need to memorize vocabulary, and yes, I think that's enough to have a good life.

'Need to memorizing' is incorrect; after 'need to' the base form 'memorize' should be used. Also, 'the vocabulary' is better as 'vocabulary' in general sense.

× Just like what I said before, I usually write something important in my checklist and before the before the day and when when I get up I see my checklist and check whatever I need to school and that is.

✓ Just like I said before, I usually write important things in my checklist the day before, and when I get up, I look at my checklist and check whatever I need to take to school.

The original sentence is repetitive and incomplete ('and that is'). It also misses 'take' after 'need to'. The correction improves clarity, removes repetition, and completes the sentence.